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Xatile of Morgon


Hello fair readers. i am Xatile of Morgon. here you will find my head cannon blogs and fan fictions to your hearts content. Please do not be a jerk or a troll. that is all i ask. other than that,Enjoy

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After taking the Reichstag, Dimitri and Reznov thought that there job was over. They were wrong. After being teleported to a new dimension, they find themselves in a world with techno-colored ponies. Now, with the help of Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo, they must try to find a way home. However, not only are the enemies of Equstria trying to stop them, but also the enemies from Earth as well. Can Dimitri and Reznov stop the Nazis and Changeling and find their way home, or will Equstria fall to the might of the Third Reich and Queen Chrysalis?

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Comment posted by Xatile of Morgon deleted Jun 4th, 2014

As much as I hate to say it, I may have to read this. Reznov is best komrade, after all.

5616630 Yes he is mate. Yes he is.i tried to capture the aspects of him that make him such a great character. hopefully i stayed true for the first part and continue that as well as for the other characters.

After reading, I found some grammatical anomalies, which I is too tired to point out right now. Good characterizations of RD, Scoots, and Pinkie. Good set up (nopony actually knows what happened; none of them used the spell), and potential to have pony komrades.
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I will be watching.

5616707 ill go check that out as soon as i can. thank you for pointing it out.

5616708 Im hoping all goes well as i start the second chapter. this is my first time writing a fan fiction so im just getting my feet wet. hopefully with support i can get better at writing these and get over my really bad writers block.

5616743 something I've found that helps is, before writing, put at the top of whatever you use to write the Cliff's Notes of what will happen in the chapter you are about to write. That way, you at least have a guide. All you need to do is connect A to B to C, without going straight from A to Q.

Just don't end up like this one story that got down voted to oblivion, then removed by the author. He basically just threw together a shit-ton of technical wartime CoD jargon into a sorry excuse for a a story.
Your story, on the other end of the first-time spectrum, has promise.

5616796 Thank. i try to find a balance of what i know from CoD and MLP so that the two dont clash against each other.:twilightsmile:

Reznov.........and Dimitri........... in equestria??????????????????????????????
alright then :rainbowwild:

5786527 And the Nazis. Dont forget the f*squee*ing-.

I usually don’t like CoD stories. As I used to be an addict, now I’m better, but hate most of the franchise. The fanfics on this site are, in quote, “ ...basically just threw together a shit-ton of technical wartime CoD jargon into a sorry excuse for a a story.” I do, however, like the lore and campaign of WaW and BO. Overall, this has promise.

5819267 Ill try to keep the jargon at a minimum. i read too many cross overs that blow up with alot of it and it kills the mood of the story. im actually in the middle of another that involve Irons and having another chance in ponyville to right his wrongs and not following in the footsteps he walked back on earth with manticore and the corruption of his company.

To anyone who think's this story is dead, do not worry it is not. the second chapter is done and i am getting to work on the 3rd. My problem is school, lack of inspiration, and major writers block. thank you to those who are patient enough to wait from this long, unannounced hiatus. just a heads up chapter 3 will be 30 minutes before the events of chapter 2 so if you get lost don't worry, i just think that having that tid bit of time lapse in chapter 2 wouldn't fit right no matter how much i try to make it sound otherwise in my head. anyways thank you guys so much for reading and here you go with Chapter 2: New World, Newer Problems.

7133407 liked your story so far, it's worth a read

7319209 why thank you very much ^-^
I try my best at writing stories...and i just realized alot of typos :twilightblush::facehoof:
Welp back to the rewriting board XD

Dimitri and Reznov died in Black Ops, not Black Ops 2.

My mistake. It's been so long since i played them i got them mixed up, despite one is set into the future and the other during the Cold War Era. Plus both are good games so another way to mix them up for me.

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