You know, every day I try to be a normal kid. I go to school, do my homework, and hang out with my friends. I've always dreamed of having a pony as a pet. But now my room is filled with these technicolor ponies and I'm just about ready to kill myself. I've read all the damn fics about how awesome it would be to have a pony in real life, but Celestia damnit this sucks balls. Pinkie, what did I tell you about disobeying physics!
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Just some quick notes
-The character is NOT a self insert, he resembles me in no way. (well, some ways I guess, actually it's mostly a parody)
-This can be considered a parody of sorts, but it's not. (sorta)
-Have fun reading it. (I hope)
originality level: 0
thumbs-down for making another pony-meets-human story with no actual original parts.
422382 I can't say I've ever read a story that shares the same exact parts of my story. Can't say I have....
I really don't know where you get the no original parts thing from. If anybody has written a story like this one, link me to it. PLEASE.
Downvoted for the same reason as Generaal.
I started laughing during the raccoon attack and continued to do so until finishing the story.
422398 I question whether you read the synopsis, or read the story....
I've seen the idea "Ponies on Earth" used many times, yes.
But this is my own take on it.
I wouldn't even bother voting this down, seriously. The ponies on earth and vice versa should might as well be it's own genre instead of original concept. With that in mind, you get my thumbs up for a different, not-quite-heartwarming take on what would happen if Ponies actually showed up, and yes, it did make me laugh
422382
What, does "he thinks it's going to be awesome but instead it's a disaster" not count as an original part?
I think this story is pretty hilarious~! The beginning with the box just made me laugh but when you got to Applejack you just about killed me with laughter buddy. I like your interesting and not so perfect take on the whole ponies to earth thing. Thumbed up and all that
This story...
You sir, are fucking awesome.
TACTICAL FAVOURITE IN BOUND.
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dude, there are at least a thousand HiE'/PoE's out there. I've read about a dozen of them. Some lead to disaster, yes. One even ended bad.
+1 and fav for a funny take on a stale idea.
This made me laugh. So thumbs up. lol
422474 Sigh...
"Everything that can be invented, has been invented."
I'm just going to leave it at that. Because arguing obviously won't do any good. Comedy is in the eye of the beholder, kinda like beauty. This fic is a comedy one, and if you didn't laugh or anything than I understand why you dislike it, but simply dismissing it because it shares the same premise as others have already written? That seems harsh to me. Comedy in the form of parody is all about taking an idea and adding your own spin to it. But meh.
Aha, I love this! XD Keep it up bro!
That was awesome!
I loved it.My favorite by far.It was also funny.Keep on goin'.Oh and by the way it would be bad if Applejack actully caught anypony.
Lars and Generaallucas... You didn't even actually read this, did you?
It's a DECONSTRUCTION of PoE fics. It boggles my mind that you have dismissed it as "another pony-meets-human story with no actual original parts." I don't know how anyone could actually read this fic and come to that conclusion.
Personally, I thought it was hilarious. Thumbs up from me.
422544 Thanks! that's what I was trying to say.
Eh, it was okay, but really, it was mostly just a really dramatically messy version of My Little Dashie.
you should have made this a series, would have been epic for the sake of laughter...anyway, hope to read more from you soon!
Utter chaos and ponies. My two favorite things in the world. Even better that the chaos was caused by ponies.
422557 i think the word you're looking for is parody.
Thumbs up out of kindness
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It wasn't THAT close, so not exactly. I really did like the story though.
422382>>422398
Thumbs-downing something without reading it is pretty much the cardinal sin of reviewing. Not only are you contributing nothing... you are actually negatively impacting something without any regard for content. For all you know, this is a fantastic artwork you would have loved had you given it a chance... cliches don't have to be bad.
Heck, the show has repeatedly advocated: "don't judge a book by its cover". It boggles my mind that people can do exactly that in its most literal form and still proclaim themselves fans of MLP.
And if you did read the story, then have a better reason than simply its genre. Grammar, plot, characterization, story progression, pacing, and such are all perfectly valid reasons. "I've seen something like this before" is not.
Shame on you. Shame on you both.
Well haters will hate. These types of stories always have some Bronys that just hate it in general. Well, in my opinion, you did a pretty good job. But I feel that some of the ponies didn't act as they should. Ok, you did a really good job with RD, AJ, Rarity, (and of course) pinkie pie, but I didn't understand fluttershy, twilight, and celestia. My thought of that is twilight bombarding with questions, fluttershy being somewhere over.........*looks*....there, hiding in a corner, and celestia somewhat mad or confused. The story felt a little short in an ending, but no one's writing is perfect and my work is nothing near it. If rated I would give it a 3.75 / 5, which is good for a mane 6 on earth fiction. I hope you keep writing even though (unnamed) haters will continue to hate. With everything, at least you made a dead funny story!
I was laughing so hard that my stomach hurts.
This was fking hilarious
ZOMG i just read and recorded this for my youtube channel, hope you dont mind. i just thought my viewers would enjoy some comedy!!!
Well that's odd, the last time I was here on Earth retrieving a pony it was a lot more emotional.
Just how the heck did they got stranded on earth once before and still don't know shit about fingers and TV
Whacky funny
Was a pretty fun read.
Although the HIE genre is overused, PIE is not as commonly used. Give this author a chance just like people gave my story "Alone" a chance.
lol
This was good, it may be a rather typical concept but it made me laugh so thumbs us for you.
I love this story! It makes sense that Fluttershy would just sit there and do nothing at all!
I don't get why other people don't like your story!
I mean it is original! I have never read a fanfiction where Applejack watches porn and tries to do the positions; Twilight reads a whole dictionary and uses the words in sentences; Pinkie Pie flying through a roof; and Rarity using a tooth brush to brush her mane!
Now tell me, where have you seen anything like this before!
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Well, I have just a few things.
I'm no editor, but I have read a LOT of fanfics. I have to say, you've really embodied comedy.
Most fics just have a few giggles, but this one really made me laugh. Every pony's earth extravaganza could easily relate to what one would expect them to do. I have the feeling, though, like you didn't embody their personalities all too much. 
The story felt just a tad rushed, so we really didn't get much description or build of the Mane Six.
I know we already know what they're like, and for that I apologize. Its just an innocent suggestion. 
I do understand that this is just supposed to be a quick, chaotic comedy though.
And what are all those people TALKIN BOUT?
the description does seem generic, but the actual storyline is very different from almost any other piece. 
Overall, I really enjoyed this.
I thought the value that needed to get across did do its effect. There's just a few little things. BUT BRAVO! 
428318 why thank you for your opinion. And yes, this was just a quick, chaotic story. Actually, I was considering making it into a series, where the ponies stay on earth. That way I could avoid making it seemed rushed, and I really am considering it. Glad you laughed!
as for the people saying this is unoriginal and generic, they obviously didn't read the story...
428349 No problem.
And if you do decide to turn it into a series, I'll be glad to read it. It would be fun to see what you can do. 
Nice to see that there are FIMfics that are still funny because all this sad stuff lately had me feeling a little down, then i read this and couldnt breathe for about 10 min.
428471 thats how i feel
too much sadness mowadays
glad you enjoyed!
You're genius! This is one of the funniest things I've ever read. Thank you for permanent laughing for 5 minutes.
You are a genius, my friend. A god damn genius! It was impossible not to laugh!
This is the best POE take I've ever seen. Really, you are a genius. Thumbs up :D
I know I've read carnivore Rainbow Dash SOMEWHERE!!! But where?
Now I'm not so sure I want to visit Ponyville.
422382
And another thing: F.U. this is funny.
423244 To tide you off till I have the pictures for this
HATER GONNA HATE
PONIES GONNA PWN
Hilarious story, loved the racoon.
"GOD DAMNIT PINKIE PIE!"
^ this ^ just damn, that man has FAR more patience then me. I was laughing the second Twilight tore the remote apart cause I knew it was all downhill from there. You have been faved