• Published 4th Jun 2014
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Jumanji in Equestria - PressStart

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epilogue-two years later

It was the anniversary of burning the game and Fleur entered Roseluck's place.

"Hey everypony, I brought champagne." Fleur said in a cheerful tone.

"Champagne is good," Colgate says, nodding her head. Roseluck also nods in agreement. She's been a lot quieter since the game, but she's been getting better.

"I was wondering when you'll get here." Flitter said And Fleur giggles.

"Fancy Pants forgot that I was seeing you girls today. It's been two full years, what have you girls been up to?" Fleur asked sitting on the couch next to Roseluck.

"Not very much. Ponyville's been boring," Colgate replies.

"Still mourning over Ado. He didn't even get a proper burial..." Roseluck says, trailing off. The room became silent until Flitter spoke.

"Cloudchaser and Thunderlane are dating." Flitter said.

"Congratulations to them! Have you found yourself anypony yet, Flitter?" Colgate says.

"Well, there's Sorin..." Flitter said starting to trail off.

"You don't sound too happy. Something wrong?" Colgate asked.

"I was about to ask him, but Rainbow Dash beat me to it." Flitter said bummed out.

"Well now I feel bad for being the only one of us that has a stallion." Fleur said with a sigh then started to pour the champagne.

"Come here, Flitter," Colgate says, offering herself for a hug. Flitter hugged Colgate and then her ears perked up to the sound of drums.

"Flitter, I need to... Do you hear that?" Colgate asks, hearing the drums as well.

"It can't be..." Flitter said trailing off again as the four mares walked outside to see a pony dug hole where they had burned the game.

Author's Note:

This is the last chapter. Don't hate the ending, this was the ending that I wanted. Who knows, there might be a JiE 2.

Comments ( 7 )

4533695 :rainbowlaugh: well if you want a serious answer it is in season four.

4536989 I see that you liked it. But what exactly did you like about it?

4537042
I really liked the different traits you gave each character. I also liked that this is a Crossover of Jumanji. Sure it was a little rough in some parts, however I can defiantly see that you have great imagination. :twilightsmile:

4537049 what do you think that the ending?

4537055
I liked it! Though I kinda feel bad for the next pony who probably is going to play it.
All n all, I give this story 3 our of 5 stars. Keep it up.

4537070 thanks and yes I agree with that. You can't destroy the board...

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