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quill and ink


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It was the final battle. My tribe the Dersaei finally were going to defeat the Hydra's clan Edoni but everything wen't wrong I was knocked unconscious and awoke on a slave ship. When I awoke I was sen't to battle for the entertainment of the Equestrians, in the Arena. I will not die in the Arena for the entertainment of others, I will become legend and my name will ring through the Arena for ages to come. My name is Capussa leader of the Dersaei the survivor of Brictus survivor of the Arena !

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Wasn't toooooooooooooo baaaad. Could be touched up upon, flesh out the characters a bit, and think of something better.

4548552 What do you mean think of something better ?

4548577
Ah just a little joke on the end there, I think you have something going here, keep up the work.

4548585 I'll do my best to make the next chapter longer and get all the characters fleshed out.

4548585 Alright I edited tell me what you think.

4590105 I thought they needed to be used there.

Ugh my fuckin stomach hurts when I look at this story.

6230589 Author's regrets? I know that feel.

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