Very very good chapter! The visuals presented here were a delight to envision, it's so wonderful reading about Rarity being uncomfortable with something she has to do on a near daily basis. Describing the process of her defecating were really stimulating with that kind of mindset, especially with the way with her dump being interrupted and causing her trouble. I will say that I would have preferred the last bit of her dump had been more enunciated by Rarity herself instead of the musical cues, to give her session a more satisfying "finished" feeling, before moving onto the wiping fiasco (which I also loved, Rarity sitting there helpless with a dirty butt was wonderful).
I guess Spike's got competition now, course Particle has a bit of a unique advantage over Spike. Lovethisstory, great work on the characters, interesting storyline, and as fun (and sexy) as the Octavia story.
<<< my O face after reading this chapter
Very very good chapter! The visuals presented here were a delight to envision, it's so wonderful reading about Rarity being uncomfortable with something she has to do on a near daily basis. Describing the process of her defecating were really stimulating with that kind of mindset, especially with the way with her dump being interrupted and causing her trouble.
I will say that I would have preferred the last bit of her dump had been more enunciated by Rarity herself instead of the musical cues, to give her session a more satisfying "finished" feeling, before moving onto the wiping fiasco (which I also loved, Rarity sitting there helpless with a dirty butt was wonderful).
Very good chapter, 9/10, will cum again
Wow. That was one epic chapter! Rarity is just perfect for toilet-related fics.
I hope Spike will take part in the next chapter. Multiple characters are fun.
My only complaint about the series is that cameras don't have smell detectors of some sort. And temperature detectors...
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"Rarity is just perfect for toilet-related fics."
So much this
I guess Spike's got competition now, course Particle has a bit of a unique advantage over Spike. Lovethisstory, great work on the characters, interesting storyline, and as fun (and sexy) as the Octavia story.
How long until Twilights chapter?