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Captain-Brony


Just a guy who wants to write/read some stories about ponies


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Shining Armor and Princess Cadance love each other very much, this much is obvious to everypony, but what nopony knows is Shining Armor wasn't always on board with the idea of dating a princess. In fact, he was dead set against it because he thought it would end up ruining both of their reputations. However, the pink alicorn is more than willing to fight for their love and ends up making a bet with him unlike any before it.

Now Princess Cadance has three weeks to get Shining Armor to admit he likes her back, or run the risk of losing him forever.

New cover art is thanks to http://dm29.deviantart.com/ who is an amazing sport when it comes to the pics.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 262 )

I can tell this is going to be a fun read:raritystarry:

That is awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it comes out soon.

accept my wishes.....


Accept my kisses.....


I love those lines!

4478845 I hope so. And thanks for faving :pinkiehappy:

4479076 Me too. Thanks for faving man:eeyup:

4479839 I'm so glad to hear that!!:pinkiehappy: And thanks for faving too:yay:

4479875 Thanks, and thanks for faving too:pinkiehappy:

:pinkiegasp::yay: That is all thank you:pinkiehappy:.
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Your pacing is pretty fast but I'm guessing you just wanted to get the point.:pinkiehappy:

Other than that, I like it. Can't wait for more.

A very good start. A bit fast but not so fast to miss something too important. I like how Cadance is teasing Shining.

Good Work. Please more and please FAST!

4481076 But If I do it fast then there might be a chance I do it too fast:duck:

4481119 Hmm.... maybe.

Then do it as fast as you can with quality.

4481520 I know, I know... was not my best comment I ever wrote... but not the worst either :pinkiehappy:

Well Nice little word fight in this Chapter. I hope there will be more of this in the future^^

Good stuff, the grammar's pretty decent, and the story's flowing well.

It's quite amusing too, next chappy ASAP! :pinkiehappy:

The Tackle Hug. That was funny. That was too good. I hope the rest of Cadence's attempts get shot down as well.

Cadenza Flirtatious!

Cadence needs to find some advice to the only ponies she know: Celestia and Luna.

By the end, the whole castle is going to be watching the "show". :ajsmug:

4492812 A little more than likely:trollestia:

Meanwhile, Cadance and her two friends were busy getting her ready for her next 'attack'. They were a green unicorn and a white pegasus.

The red pegasus opened her closet and started to flip through the dresses.

Apparently Cadance's Pegasus friend's special talent is changing her fur color.:pinkiecrazy: (Color Pinwheel cutie mark?):facehoof:

4492951 WHOOPS!!:derpyderp1: Good catch!:twilightblush:

Turning a cliche into an original chuckle fest, nice one:pinkiehappy:

Awesome lol keep up the good work:twilightsmile:

I can't stop laughing. That was awesome. Good luck with the next chapter. Shinning is going to need it.

I thought that Cadence would dress up in a nurse outfit or a cheerleader outfit for future references.

I'd say you had both cheesiness and feels.:pinkiesick: But I still like it.:yay:

What SageBrony07 said, can't stop laughing. Guess Cadence's friends would be in big trouble if Doctor Amora finds them. Great, now you got me thinking of Shining Armor in ninja costume, pretty badass:moustache:

4507885 He protects you before you even know he's there:rainbowlaugh:

4507944 Unless he's with Cadence, then you're on your own:rainbowlaugh:

4507964 Truly!!:rainbowlaugh: But even if he wasn't, you'd never know he was there:rainbowwild:

I like it and Cnut wait for the next chapter!:twilightsmile:

:rainbowkiss: hahahahaha Im loving this!
I WANT MOAR! :flutterrage:

Yes much cheesiness
But survey says the cheese works

oh and by the way :trixieshiftright:
is this even before the biggest wedding of the century? and how in the world....no...THE UNIVERSE!!!!! did Cadence make first eye contact with shining? :unsuresweetie:

4538079 This is taking place in like season 1. And they already established she was Twilight's foal sitter so she had to have met him at some point, but if that's the origin you're looking for...:fluttercry: I suggest you look someplace else because I don't want to do that:fluttershyouch:

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