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After a horrible tragedy, Candace ends up falling off the edge and into the ocean. Where will she go? What will she do? What will she eat? Read to see if she survives in this adventurous tale of tragic....
My mom edited this. Love u mom <#3
Ok so it still needed to b editered so my sis jaylana editered it 2 also after my mom did it. K cool
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Quick, fix these in the description before someone notices:
ocean?
Something is redundant here, not sure what you exactly want to say.
Also the cover photo has "tp" instead of "to"
Feel free to delete my comment after you fixed these.
Reads short description.
...
I don't know, fly maybe?
Stop.
Please.
This story was like reading a child's summary of a book.
It's redundant, short and painful.
Thank you for taking the time to read my comment.
I'm getting the feeling that this It's a trollfic
Is the P in the picture title intentional? Becuase that definitely says 'tp'.
4471500 if you read the story youd kno why she cant fly >:U
4471785 no it wont intenchinal :)
GOD DAMN IT! NOW I'LL BE WONDERING WHAT SHIMMY ARMOR DID BACK IN '96 FOR THE REST OF THE WEEK!!!!
4471893 Oh sooory :((((( plz read anyhow
4471356 Oooh yea i fixed em.
I like the story I think we can learn a thing or two about swimming about swimiing away to the distace
4485932 Yeeah
I still don't know how to use fimfiction so when a new story shows up I never notice and then I see it and I'm like oh! and it's like christmas or whatever the ponies have for christmas probably celestiamas
she gives you presents but it's always the sun
4550293 OOOOOooooh. sory i dint see your reply
I hope she didn't get eaten into a dolphin. :C
This is my favorite one.