Very interesting. I wonder how this will all play out

only thing that comes to mind for me is the title name, mostly because of FFXIV:ARR in T5 with phase 2 of the fight with Conflagration and the stupid noobs who didnt understand the simple mechanics.

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I have no idea what any of that means....

Luna: I know that what my sister and Twilight are doing is monstrous, but I am too scared to stand up to them.

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One of which is stronger then her.

And the other has the elements that banished her before.

Considering she mentioned they just want this problem to 'go away' I think she might be fearful that they'll do something anyways to her as well. Considering Celestia just taught Twilight a spell to help her torture, I think it might be a biiiit more justified here.

4480856 Justified or not, I bet she's not even going to try and speak to them.

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Twilight outright said she doesn't care, and wants Ember to die anyways.

Celestia we don't know yet, so maaaybe she might be more up for it? I doubt it though.

4481065 It's a tragedy. I can only see this ending one way.

I'm enjoying this; but it seems inevitable its heading towards a bad ending with a possible post mortem twilight learns that torturing is wrong even if you've got a magic no-consequences spell .

I hope that the real ember is brought back , even if it means the brony has to sacrifice them selves to do it ; even seems like they would agree to it at this point.

I can't wait to see more! :3 Except for the clop scene I cringe at the thought D:

And I have to ask was the main character male before he came to Equestria? Or was she originally female?

He has been in that body for only a day, yet he is begging to be rutted by some stallion guard? Sounds like a bad clop plot.

this is a good story with a bad ending, I presume?

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The main character was written to be nothing in specific, rather placing the reader as the character that turns into a mare. A way of personalizing the story to make the reader the center of the naritive

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It's meant to have subtle undertones of being a trash clop story, because a large portion of what I have read along these genre lines has just the clop aspect going for it, or taking two characters from the show and mashing them together in some way... A satyr on what seems popular throughout the fandom.

Am I the only one who finds the situation oddly hilarious..? Nono, not the one with Not-Ember, that one is horrible, but the idea of Luna lecturing anypony about patience and overreacting—little miss Nightmare Moon...

On the other hand, seeing your own flaws reflected in others and denying them in yourself is fairly normal, especially for insecure egos.

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[youtube=youtube.com/watch?v=I2_ONXgvf8I]

I'm anticipating that the next chapter will be called 'Inferno'

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Good, Now give me Wednesdays lottery numbers....

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alternatively, it may be called 'burning passion'

4481402 well damn I'm a mare now and about to have sex :(

I'm getting a vibe that the character is about to die no matter what happens, so a quick request: can you at least not end the story? I can think of at least one other story where the protagonist dying doesn't spell the end of their involvement in it, and it'd be an utter waste to just finish the story here.

It would be like walking through Jerusalem with Hitler's body.

I would pay money to see this happen and also...
Heil Hitlah!
(Im German)

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9

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It's not over yet... Still have more to go

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Now I'm even more confused....

4485208 Nein Nein Nein Nein Nein!
(Please name chapter 9 Nein.)

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psssh just accept the info, surprising though is that you wouldnt know what FFXIV is let alone that every gamer would recognize something with Double-F's as an acronym for Final Fantasy

Wow. It started out kinda rocky, but by the end I was hanging on your every word!

>taught
taut

I can't believe my first impulse there is to correct spelling.

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It does sound a little bit like that. The way I read it is, if you take the original human as male and he's not really been able to do any of that sort of thing on earth then he'd like to at least have the opportunity to experience it at least once before he (well, she) gets executed. It's a pretty easy last wish to fulfill, even if the arrangements would be awkward and you might be making at least one guard miserable for a while afterwards.

For what it's worth, it'd be vaguely amusing to read an ending, preferably not taken too far down the clop road, where she gets what she asks for and is then executed shortly thereafter. It would make for a sort of sad/tragic ending.