Its been 1000 yer since Chrysalis has seen her mother Luna but only to find out that she has lost her memories. Chrysalis is trying to help her but also trying to figure out why Celestia left her to fen for her self something happened that night and she detriment to find out.
Page generated in 0.077 seconds
Total duration
747 users online
1,039,354 hits today, 2,054,621 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I'm sorry, but your grammar and spelling is atrocious. Get an editor.
this is great X3
your grammar needs fixing but i love this, i love to read more X3
4477112 Atrocious? That was an un-needed characterization.
4477182 How so? Atrocious can be used to mean 'poor quality'.
4477194 Atrocious also can mean cruel. Whatever i can agree an editor is needed. Stick to that... Itherwise the story seems fine.
Lovely premise ^^ I look forward to more
4477112
I'm looking for an editor at the moment
4477175
4477965
Glad you enjoy the story
4478005 np X3 if i was good at grammar id be your editor but my grammar is bad X3
Ugh. I just simply cannot get past the cancer that is the grammar of this story. Get an editor in here, STAT. Better yet, get a word surgeon, because this story needs some serious help.
Celestia is a bitch... :D
Wisp not Wish.
SUPER BITCH
Luna not gonna be happy.
4583213
I been looking for an editor this pass few day's im still trying
Your knowledge of ancient greek mythology and you naming her that way makes me feel honored to be greek.
you put "Where is how Luna" instead of "who"
4718611
Thanks its all fixed now
4718435
It took me a long time to chose her name I'm glad I got it right 
I'm honored
4719279 your welcome
4719310 If you want more changeling names i would be glad to provide. I personally love you with this.
4719417
thanks
That would be awesome
4719445 Proteus:Greek Shapeshifting god of "Elusive Sea change" sneaky, cunning e.t.c. Protean means adaptable, mutable, capable of assuming many forms.
Metis:Greek Titaness whos' name connoted magical cunning also a shapeshifter whos' name means wisdom, skill, craft. The "Royal Metis" was a quality the Atheneans used to describe someone who was wisely cunning.
Melissa:Greek mythology raised Zeus got transformed into a bee thus the name meaning "Bee" in greek.
Echo
Mirage
Mimic
Mirrorhoof all names i just came up with.
Abectrozeus, Cyclomatooth, names of Megacolony units in Cardfight Vanguard which is the clan of insects.
Need more? Also a changeling page named a changeling Metis like i proposed!!! http://askchrysalis.tumblr.com/post/62679985343/rariling-such-fabulous-individuality-should-be-a
http://askchrysalis.tumblr.com/post/50598608897/a-magically-augmented-changeling-wielding-a
4719486
this are awesome cant wait to use them
Thanks
4719502 Anytime!
Charsy is here for mama!
hehehe...
anyway thanks for the update, finaly, it was shprter than expected but worth the wait.
4877816
Sorry it took me so long to update had a ruff couple off weeks I hope to have the next chapter on Sunday.
4878311 sweet. and on the short summary for AOL you put in tell rather than in till.
Angle Bunny!
Otherwise, good chapter!
4879371
Thanks its fix now
4583213 It....it's too late...we lost the patience...(I know, I know; horrible, horrible pun)
Hey Skyler my name is Tyler!
4901246
Hi Tyler its nice to meet you