The Love of a Changeling

After her defeat in Canterlot, Queen Chrysalis returns to her hive to find it in ruin. Amidst the rubble, she finds a lone survivor.

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Mare Serenitis

Mare Serenitis #1 · May 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This is shiny.
It'd make a pretty decent opener for a larger story as well (if you're ever inclined that way).

Katnips

Katnips #2 · May 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

First story I read after 4 months of being 'dead'. And I'm quite satisfied! Thank you for that! :D

Cobolt Soundwave

Cobolt Soundwave #3 · May 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Very sad, but good.

Crystal Draco

Crystal Draco #4 · May 29th, 2014 · 1 · ·

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Thanks.
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You're welcome.
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I might do a larger story that takes place after this one, it depends if I'll have the time and inspiration.

I'm glad you all liked it.

DarkTheDivine

DarkTheDivine #5 · May 30th, 2014 · · ·

Interesting story. Emotional and sad, but thought provoking. It asks us whether Chrysalis is as a monster as we think she is (or at least the citizens of Equestria).

Some problems that came up was grammar and sentence structure and the occasional accidentally replaced word, but still a good one-shot.

You have earned a like. (It would be interesting to see a sequel)

Crystal Draco

Crystal Draco #6 · May 31st, 2014 · 1 · ·

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thanks for the like and compliment.
What I write here is almost all the practice I get. Other responsibilities get in the way of doing any more.