Twilight is subject to visions from both the past and future. Equestria is at war, Twilight has become the icon of the country and the immortal leader of the nation. She is one of the three alicorn's in existence, one of which is only an alicorn because of a mistake Twi made. She is being used by her royal guards and in the middle of all this mess, she is seriously considering just leaving the conflict all together. But how did she get here? What happened to everypony? How long has it been? Well, read and find out as we pick apart the past one memory at a time.
Cover art by Follow Focus
Chapters (1)
Now this is an interesting idea! Can't wait to see where you go with this :D
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you're so nice to me. Thank you. 
I wrote this after downing a pot of coffee for a late night study session, but my internet was out, so I couldn't study. Instead I opened up word and started writing this. Fell asleep on my keyboard.
Any criticisms? I would really like to hear some.
4498647 :D Well as always I focus mostly on character and character development, and it's a mite bit early to review over that. But I'm liking what you have so far. Twilight and the guilt that she feels for the mistakes of her past, coupled with the fact that she is reliving them for some reason is a really good basis for the growth of her character! Any-who... I guess that it all comes down to where you go from here! But so far so good! :D
Okay, Pumpkin being proficient in magic I get. However, what happened to Pound, Spike, Celestia, Luna, and Cadence? (And the other elements for that matter? Both the ponies and the gems?) Also, seeing as how Jackrabbit (Nice Alice in Wonderland reference btw
) is only an advisor, why doesn't Twi tell him where to get off (preferably off her back!) I can honestly say I'm hooked and hope this comes off hiatus soon! 