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Warning: This story contains diapers, diaper usage, sexual themes, and AB/DL themes. If these do not appeal to you, then please do not read any further.

The Canterlot Diaper Club, restricted to the elite. What occurs behind its doors is something special. Tonight a well known stallion pays a visit to this club. As he traverses the walls of this establishment he submits himself to the truth of his character, as taboo as that may be.

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Once again I tricked a drunk Lphooves into drawing diaper art,
sadly I forgot I had also agreed to write something on it...
So go and harass the sober guy here.

I want to thank all of crinkleponies for editing.
And making me question why the hell I keep agreeing to doing this stuff.

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Comments ( 12 )

What a delightful concept! The descriptions and details really helped flesh out this secret club. Impressive work and good use of the characters.

The only constructive criticism I could possibly offer is a few mistakes in tensing. But that's only a very very minor mistake and is barely noticeable. Everything else was rather well done.

Keep up the good work!

I'm pleased with this even though it said Sex/Teen I was expecting a "up on the changing table" scene like thing, but somehow I'm not disappointed great job.

now that's a strip club... why can't we have something like that?:heart:

Wow that was amazing XDD :pinkiehappy: I agree with Caper why can't we have something like that lolz :pinkiecrazy:

How do you expect your readers to cum if your characters don't cum, but I still liked this story. B.t.w I found an error;

Seeing this, Fleur giggled at his expense, her teasing ever present. Looking at him wistfully, she was prepared to bring to bring this all together. “My, my it looks like someone is feeling excited. Well then would you please be a dear and change me~” She turned back to him winking, “The supplies are right next to the stage.”

she was prepared to bring to bring this all together.

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Oops, fixed. Thanks for pointing that out.

That sounds like a fun place to be. I like it, aside from a few errors here and there it is a very nice story. The concept is great too.

I personally think the only reason this story has the number of downvotes it has is because of mean people who downvoted it simply because of the specific diaper related concept of the story.

So to you I say, this is a great story. :twilightsmile:

4459133 you're welcome.

EDIT: I found another error;

She put on a big smile, “Hello there mister, my name is Tammy. Would you like to play with me?” The mare brought the bear in close to herself and gave it a hug, nuzzling it. Before he could respond, he heard a voice call out from the distance.

Not only did this line make me Dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!:heart:
it helps show this next error.

Seeing Tulip’s diaper approaching critical capacity, Tammy turned towards Fancy Pants and smiled. “Thank you for your complement earlier, sir, and please enjoy your stay.” She quickly turned in towards the direction of her superior and yelled, “Mrs. Tammy, please wait!” And galloped after her. This was made all the more difficult by the thick diaper she was wearing.

“Mrs. Tammy, please wait!”

So either you mean "Mrs. Tulip, please wait!" or she's yelling to herself.

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And this cements my decision to take a break to catch up on my sleep. Fixed thanks again.

Cocaaaaaaine

How i SHOULD feel: :flutterrage:




How i DO feel: :trollestia:

that was good i whish that place existed

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