When words fall short music begins
War Rider of the Apocalypse is sent to Equestria for the destruction of Earth before its appointed time, will he learn the Magic of Friendship? or will he lay waste to the land in a tide of blood, friends will be made as well as enemies but none shall fathom the coming of the Red Rider whenever he rides there is naught but blood and bones in his wake.
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I like it, but I think the pacing to fast
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thanks for the comment it's my first time writing so advice is appreciated
I'll keep an eye on it, it has a good idea bit rushed though
Great so far. Some grammatical issues here and there but it's tolerable. Pacing's a little quick, but hey, it's War. I didn't expect him to come to Equestria gradually and peacefully.
~Quetzal Sunstorm
As said, it's paced a bit fast. You also need to put a few more breaks in sentences now and again. Also, you're using capital letters where they're not needed. Not trying to be fussy, just trying to help.
uh oh
Hey wheres chapter 2?!
There it is
Love this story. But you already gussed that.
On a completly unrelated note, you guys remember that Spike based Anime, right?
Yeah, that is oming out once we have... Say, 230 more people to sign the petition.
LINK
Still, love the story.
4472181 Thanks for the comment Blacklight, Next Chapter is already underway
4474888 Excellent.
nice as always
YOU SIR ARE NOW MY FAVOURITE AUTHOR
:)
4531034 Why thank you my good sir
4532821 as you may have noticed, I am a MAJOR darksiders fan. I know almost everything about darksiders (the first one I'm more familiar with, but the second one, everyone's names were too long to remember, but I know the important stuff)
4533041 Sit tight my friend giant monster slaying coming up in next chapter
Yes.
4535022
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
To answer your chapter question, both is the answer
As for the story update, I would squee if I could but I cannot so I will yay
I award you with one of my soon to be famous apocalypse cookies, manufactured by me, copyrighted by me, and made by me
Heh. Celestia and Luna wouldn't even stand a chance against him. Any spell that Celestia casts on him wouldn't even hurt him in the slightest. It serves more as an annoyance then actual punishment.
4644606 Excellent
lovely chapter. :)
more?
4692578 Fear not Deadman I'm still working on it
this must have been a very special scowl since War's face is almost permanently a scowl. seriously, in the game he laughed once, and that was before his death/revival. and in the book, it was stated he smiled for the first time in 500 years (thats right, war is pretty much twice as old a celestia. *puts on nerd glasses* since death is older than time itself, war must be at least 4000 years old, 6000 at most.)
Actually War is older than Celestia and Luna combined since he is a Nephilim (the oldest race in existence) he should be at least more than a million years old
4883386 meh, my darksiders knowledge is failing me at the moment, it will take a few days to reboot.
did you know that war is agile enough to even keep death on his toes? sure, death cut his arm off, but that was with the help of strife and fury (not to mention using war's sword to cut the arm off). so, not only is he strong enough to vastly crack a mountain to the point of breaking (excluding tremor gauntlet), has enough power to take on celestia and luna and keep going, but agile enough to go toe to toe with the fastest of angels and win.
4883446 Chaos form hehehehe this'll be fun
where the hell did Luna come from in this story?
4887139 edited sorry about that
Stupid ponies. They know that they can't win against him yet they aren't pulling back. Mortal vs god never ends well. And yes, I basicly see the riders as gods.
4922247 portray them as u like what matters is what War intends to do with his powers restored
one question >>> Ruin?
4963217 Unknown for now ideas are welcome if you want me to add him
4964187
Were going to need more coffins.
4964187 well for me atleast war feels kinda incomplete without ruin after all wath folows war but ruin?
though I am curius in this AU equsteris is in earths place or he wil go to earth too?
4965435 Death & despair is coming for a wisit ^^
4966152 That is a definite
i was half expecting chaos-form, but this...... makes it way more interesting now that war is back to full strength
4922247 well, technically the four horsemen are mortal, war has three recorded deaths that i know of, and death (ironically) killed himself and absalom. the only thing is that the horsemen are extremely hard to kill. as wailing host brilliantly described it in this chapter, war was nearly exhausted in his fight against the changelings and was even bleeding heavily
4964187 id prefer that you keep the characters inside the darksiders game. add ruin, chaos form, samael, uriel & co., etc.
this was the chapter that made me fave this story
5098914 I would put Uriel, but i just don't know how, Ruin? hmmmmm
5119023 you dont have to put them in, their just suggestions....... badass suggestions
Darksiders/mlp crossover? THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER! Im going to like follow and favorete this story.
whenever this gets updated if it does i think he will go true form on them