confessions (Redone)
Today is a new day and with it, a new feeling that burns ever brighter in your chest. You finally recovered from the nasty cold that plagued your poor body for the past week and a half. By this time, you would have been mumbling and chewing on your tongue were it not for Tia and her friends spending their time with you and banishing the boredom away with games and stories.
In addition to Honey Aurora, there were also Chrysalis, Daring Blitz, and Star Swirl. A changeling, a pegasus, and a unicorn, respectively.
Chrissy was a midnight black changeling with a dark cerulean mane and green eyes. Daring Blitz was a light gold, almost brown pegasus with a rough, greyscale mane and moderate rose eyes. Star Swirl was a light grey unicorn with a simple brown mane and brilliant gold eyes.
The six of you had a lot of time to bond in the past week. In this brief time, not only you warmed up to them, but you also saw Tia in a whole new light. Usually, when she is with you, she's relying on every word you say. But around her friends, she was much more assertive and expressive with her ideas, in a good way. In fact, it kinda reminds you of mommy.
Today though is special. You told your friends about your crush with Feather Curls and they all agreed to help you set the perfect moment for you to ask her out.
"That's so romantic…" Chrysalis swooned as she looked over you with half lidded eyes "I can already imagine the two of you, looking over the setting sun on the beach, holding hooves- err, I mean… limbs together. And then, you lean closer to her and give her a big kiss…"
"Eww…" the guys cried, you included.
"Chrissy, really? That's disgusting, mares have cooties." You declare, finishing your statement with a fake gagging sound.
Chrysalis simply rolls her eyes and then looks at Daring Blitz "You don't think it's disgusting, right Blitz?"
Daring Blitz shakes his head "No way! You'd never catch me kissing a mare!"
Chrissy frowns a bit but quickly recovers, changing her attention to Star Swirl, looking expectedly "And what about you, Swirly?"
"I believe that I lack enough knowledge on the subject to form a valid point at the moment." Star Swirl finishes his sentence by shooting a smirk towards Chrysalis, who looks more annoyed than anything.
"Colts…" she says, exasperated.
"Tell me about it," says Tia as the three fillies roll their eyes at the same time.
"They just don't understand romance and the matters of the heart as well as we do," Honey explains with playful tone.
You smile nervously as the fillies talk with themselves about stuff for dates, romantic dinners and marriage! Freaking marriage! You only want Feather Curls as your special somepony, but obviously, it wasn't enough, apparently.
You quickly interject when the talking reaches names for the babies "Guys, guys, relax. I just need you to help me so I can ask Feather Curls out. Not all… this."
The three fillies look at you for a moment and then shake their heads at the same time. Tia approaches you slowly "Brother, brother, brother. You really don't have a clue, do you."
"Apparently not…" you hesitate.
"Don't worry big bro, we'll help you. Chrysalis, Daring Blitz, you two take care of the clothing, we need something fancy but not overwhelming. Aurora, Star Swirl, you're in charge of the settings, pick a good place and make it as romantic as possible. I'll make sure to turn big brother into a mares wooing machine by tonight. Are you ready!"
"Yeah!" you all shout together, though you have a bad feeling about it.
A few minutes later you sit on your rump in your room, Tia is standing in front of you near a blackboard with a crude drawing of yourself and a pony surrounded by a heart.
"So, first lesson will be; how to greet a mare."
You raise your hand.
Tia groans, "Yes, brother…"
"Remind me again why I need to do this."
"I already told you… In order to impress your mare you must first act like a gentlecolt. You can't just go running around like a brute and expect her to fall in love with you instantly."
"Fine, fine, continue…"
"Okay… so the first step is how to properly greet a mare. You start by giving her a compliment. You must flatter her, but you also must be sincere. Compliment on either her appearance or her personality. Some mares prefer one over the other…"
Oh boy, that's going to be a looooooong day indeed…
Next stop, outfit… It took all your brain space to memorize everything Tia told you. The sheer amount of things to remember almost made your brain go haywire. Luckily, that part of the day was behind you, however, it is only going downhill from now.
Chrissy and Daring Blitz are arguing over the toga pattern as you and Tia enter the room. The two stop their yelling match and turn to look directly at you.
"Let's let him to decide, then." Daring Blitz takes both togas, presenting them to you. The first one was An off-white toga with a purple border, the second one was deep purple with gold embroidery across the entire thing.
"Well…" Chrissy urges you.
You feel something nudge at your side and turn to see Tia, looking at you with a warm smile. You smile back and point your finger.
"That one." Your finger lands on the off-white toga. Daring Blitz frowns while Chrissy shoots him a smug grin.
"There must be more than this, right?” Tia asks. “We still need a tunic to go underneath the toga"
"Sure, sure, follow us…" Daring Blitz turns around and trots towards a closet of some sorts. He opens it and steps inside, coming out with a tunic carefully carried in his teeth.
"Wow, Daring! It's… beautiful, where did you find this!" Tia exclaims as she examines the tunic. You must admit, it sure was fancy looking. The entire tunic was made out of deep red silk, not a single loose thread or a wrinkle could be seen, it was in exquisite condition, but most importantly, it was made with your body shape in mind, not ponies.
"I made it myself," Chrissy says proudly, "Daring brought me some silk and other accessories and I made it especially for you."
"But how did you have my measurements?" you ask, truly bewildered.
Chrissy rolls her eyes "I'm a changeling dummy, I simply transformed to look exactly like you." she bopped your nose with her hoof and smiled.
"I… That's… This… Wow…" You look at the tunic and try to find your words. After a few failed attempts at forming coherent sentences you let your body speak for itself as you wrap Chrissy and Blitz in a bear hug "Thank you such you guys."
The three of you remain together as Tia looks over a watch and gasps "Brother, we need to hurry, put the tunic and toga on, quickly!"
Without missing a beat, you dress up quickly and run with the other three towards the dining hall, where Aurora and Star said they would be preparing something. You, being faster than the rest, reach first to the door and are about to open it. Unfortunately, the others couldn't stop in time and all three of them crash into you, sending all of you sprawling into the hall.
You all gasp as your eyes finally open. The entire hall was almost completely dark, the curtains block the sunlight from outside and the only means of lighting are a few candles on the dining table and a chandelier full of lit candles, draping the room in a gentle glow.
Aurora and Star Swirl were in the process of spreading a few rose petals around the table when you came crashing and tumbling.
"Guys… you need some help?" Star Swirl asks as he notices your dazed faces.
"This is amazing!" Tia whispers.
"It is, isn't it," Aurora says as she hops down from the table and trots towards you. You finally untangle yourself from the rest and stand up by the time Aurora reaches you.
"Wow, you look amazing." Aurora circling you, examining every detail with admiration.
"Thanks, I like what you did with the dining hall."
Aurora blushes "Thanks, but it was Star Swirl's idea to use candle light."
"That was nothing, really. I simply remembered a book about courting. It stats clearly that candle light is the best source of light for romantic situations." Star Swirl smiles as he levitates a few more candles and place them around the room.
Tia looks out into the hallway and quickly turns around "She's coming! Everypony, out!" within seconds, everypony in the vicinity slips away through a back door, leaving you alone as you start to sweat.
'What am I doing?! She's going to reject me, or laugh at my face or-' your inner monologue is cut short when the door to the dining hall opens, revealing Feather Curls in all her beautiful glory.
She looks around in surprise before her eyes suddenly fall onto you "Umm, what is going on here, your highness? And what's with the outfit?" she giggles.
You take it as a good sign and step forward "I- uhh, I… I really like your eyes…" you blurt out, silently cursing yourself.
Feather Curls looks at you curiously, one eyebrow raised "Are you sure you are well?" she comes closer and puts her hoof on your forehead "My goodness, you're burning up!"
"N-No, I'm fine, really…"
"Then what is this about?"
"I… Oh shoot, Tia said it would be easy…"
Feather Curls looks at you even more deeply. Suddenly, her mind forms all the pieces together as she darts her eyes from you to your surroundings.
"Oh, sweetie…" she sits in front of you "I know what you are trying to do."
Your eyes lit up as you look straight into Feather Curls' eyes "You do?! So that means that-"
"We cannot do this…" she interrupts you.
"W-What…"
"We cannot do this your highness… You are way too young, not to mention that I am a commoner. And besides, I'm a married mare." She points at a small ring necklace around her neck.
"But I… But you…" You try to find words, but your mind fails you. After all what the others did for you, after all you did.
"Sweetie I’m so sorry." Feather curls sigh. “I am sure you will find a special somepony, but your feelings towards me are not true love. Believe me, you would understand when you grow older.”
Your face falls as you look downwards, a few tears threatening to fall from your eyes "You're right, I don't understand…"
"Ohh… sweetie…" Feather Curls comes closer to give you a comforting hug, but you simply pushed her away and run back to your room. You don’t stop for a second, not even when Feather Curls shouts your name.
As you reach your room, you immediately slump in your bed and grab one of your pillows closely to your chest, you can feel tears leaking from your eyes. It wasn't until that you feel something rubbing your back that you dare turn around.
Around you, all your friends are sitting on your bed, offering comforting smiles. Aurora stands next to you, rubbing your back in a comforting matter while Tia gently wipes away your tears with her hoof.
"You guys…" you stutter before you pull them all to a hug…
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4550628 pfffhahhahahahhahahahhahahahhahahha
filly Chrysalis awww
i wonder how cute a child changeling is.
tho something must have happend between Chryssi and Tia since they are enemies when grown up hmmm unless in this world they never becomes enemies maybe.
......
dick.....
I though something like that would happen. Poor little colt...
I just realize... You never wrote his name.
You little devil, you
I never realizead until now.
Well that was different
4549455
TURN AROUND PRETTY LADY
Man that has to be embarrassing but most kids go through that at some point in childhood.
But Im sure he will be fine, he will be swimming in mare puss.
Awwwwwww come on
Still an awesome chapter I love this story
4551262 Not if Tia is possessive of her brother.
4551809 Is he even available? I already posted a thread in the editors group
4550793
(just my idea, he wrote this all on his own) I always write with a sad tag and it reflexes in my ideas.
4550835
That would be my fault. This chapter was my idea.
4551817
You could always ask me.
4551904 Still, I liked it and I wrote it, thus, the blame falls on the both of us
4551809 I shall slink off in shame, oh mighty grammar nazi
4551763
.....aaaaahhhhh,good times good times
4551262
ditto,.......also puberty sucks especially when you first hit it and you see your first pair of tits and get your first hard on
4551763
No...Just no...
Well... I could-
I said no and that's final!
Oh come on!
NOT. A SINGLE. WORD
Party pooper
4552288 GateKeeper: YOU DARE PUT WORDS IN MY MOUTH!?!?!?!? Me:Gate calm down.
Aww, poor...Uh...Un-Mentioned-Name.....
Derp. This is really good so far...
...And my brother is staring at me...AGAIN!!
4552606 there will be some sad moments, but there's no 'sad' tag for a reason. I just needed to balance this out, otherwise I'll get hate comments about this fic being too happy. don't worry, though, I will keep this story upbeat for the most parts
You son of a diamond dog...
Who haven't seen that coming? Seriously.
BTW, he is ageless or just normal? (he is not immortal because he can still die appearently)
4553071 Ahh... that would be telling
4553242 hes gonna be necromancedededededed by Celestia isnt he *HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUH*. I'LL BAN CHOCLATE IF SHE DOES
you x chrissy it'll work
4551817 It'd probably be better if you asked him, (or the editor of your choice), personally. The editor's group, while useful, is more for finding an editor than requesting aid...specifically, since group post notifications are now disabled on fimfiction. I wouldn't be surprised if they summarily disbanded after knighty's post.
4550788 This story doesn't have an Alternate Universe tag, consider it a hint
Pound town failure
4554415 A moment of silence for a fallen comrade...
muffins.
Muffins will heal the pain. trust me little ... human?
4554715 tis true eat the muffins and you'll feel much better by the end of it
4554715 tis true eat the muffins and you'll feel much better by the end of it
4554715 and fried chicken, fried chicken is the best to make you more resilient to pain of any kind
4554785 howell, let's say everything with lots of calories, choclate or sugar in it heals wounded hearts
4554804 watermelon and grape juice gets you a lot of black friends to protect you
4554857 you know...I was thinking that. seriously. but I tought it might be offending.
4554865 oh it's not, you should see how many vines people make about those
4554868 okay. I'll keep that in mind.
go for total freedom!
Oh, come on! Throw the kid a pity fuck!
MAH FEELS!
Are you saying that she never told him that she was married at all? Hell, he has to know about marriage right?! I mean Gaia and Solaris are married right? So, what's this kids deal?! I just can't even deal right now!
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But all in all:battlereadystrength.files.wordpress.com/2012/12/diabeetus.jpg
Also, on a side note, I was listening to:
Break Your Heart by Tiao Cruz......coincidence?
4552288 it would be funny though.
4557197
That's wrong on so many levels...
"Daring Blitz"... so Daring Do and Rainbow Dash's Ancestor?
4550788
enjoy the diabetes
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YOU SHALL BRUN IN HELL FOR WE YOU......
4620995 I'm dead. DX
It's so sad! But it's true he's to young and she has been his made for years.
Now this is how you write a little kid with a crush. Well done.
I iz friendz with Chrysalis
Aaaakwarrrrrd...
Oh jeezus. Too bad Chrysalis will soon be Tia's enemy. Like, in a few thousand years.
GOD : NO YOU BROUGHT THIS UPON YOUR SELF!
Honey Aurora, a pink earth pony filly with a mane colored with violet, rose and gold streaks and light purple eyes;
Is this cadence becuse it fits the description but y is she named this