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Evilhumour


Well, this a fan of MLP who has just started to watch the show. And I like what I see!

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This story is a sequel to Nightmare Moon's third coup


A simple continuation of where we left off last time, with Celestia being sent to a camp to work off those pounds on her flanks. A month has gone by and she is coming back for her throne, from her sister Luna who sent her away. Will it end tears, bloodshed, another thousand years to the moon, or something far worse?

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4459360 Thank you. I just wish I could have put in a joke about cracking a walnut in there... sad sigh face

4474927 I take it by your Pinkie Pies that you liked?

khatre #6 · Jun 1st, 2014 · · 1 ·

Expect for Blueblood, who was nursing a head injury from a combination of snot and moonpie.

the icing on top of the cake :trollestia:

4480104 Careful now, we don't want Tia to have relapse. :pinkiehappy:

4479271 Glad to hear it.

4554791 Thank you. How did you like Thunder Th-I mean Celestia's entrance?

4554820 Was I too mean on Blueblood?

4555023 in the case of Blueblood, fall over in pain as twin beams of moonpie and alicorn snot hit him straight in the face. lost my complete shit right there. thanks for the lulz

4555023 And all was well with all the ponies in the land.
Expect for Blueblood, who was nursing a head injury from a combination of snot and moonpie. and there i go losing my complete shit again

Nice one, more like that please :twilightsmile:

5139964 I just might do that; Two Moons is my pride and joy right now.

She flailed a bit, bating at her nose to get her once glorious treat out of her nose, before she remembered where she was, who she was in front of her and who spoke and then she forced herself steady, while rubbing a nostril quite hard while one of her more intellectually proven guards was already bringing her a glass of water to help her breath.

Someone is getting a raise :eeyup:

“Are you alright dear sister?” Celestia leaped and glided over to Luna, who’s eye was twitching as she barely restraining herself from snorking the food out. Holding her sister close to her, she gave Luna a good pat on the back. It was more like a good, solid smack that caused many nobleponies to wince, and in the case of Blueblood, fall over in pain as twin beams of moonpie and alicorn snot hit him straight in the face. There were exceptions to this; one such noblepony that was not in any pain or discomfort was Fancy Pants, who was sitting back and enjoy the scene with a nice bag of popcorn he had just for this occasion.

I am Fancy Pants in this scene :trollestia:

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