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Fuzzyfurvert


I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.

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Something is very wrong with Princess Cadance. Everypony close to her knows, except Twilight Sparkle. Something is very wrong with Twilight Sparkle. No pony knows, not even Twilight herself.

One problem lies hidden from the world and the other sits out in the open, invisible.

Something is very wrong.


This is not your traditional shipfic and touches on topics of addiction, recovery and relapse. Additionally, while this was originally written as prompt submissions to the Magic of Love: A Twidance Prompt Collab, they have been expanded upon to give more information.

Belated thanks go out to Misago and Pearple Prose for editing and being all around awesome dudes.
Change Log: Additional Edits have been made to Chapter 1 and 2 so that they feel less "prompty" and are less telly.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 185 )

Oh, my. This is going places.

Consider me hooked.

4859011
The story was awesome, but what's up with the video? XD

4952081
I'm experimenting with giving this fic a soundtrack of sorts. The video is for the song that gives the chapter its title. I intend to post a new video with each chapter.

Glad you liked the story so far. I plan on releasing a new chapter each week for a bit.

Oh. OH! You're finally doing this one? Good on you, Fuzzy. I knew those Twidance prompts would eventually spawn their own story.

4859011 Damn it, Janet! Now you've gone and put this song in my head!:pinkiehappy:

I must replace it!

*Sigh* There we go. *Leans back, relaxed*

Ooooo!

While I kind of lost interest with the TwiDance collab (sorry to the authors there!) this one did intrigue me when I read it, and I was a little sad that it was only a single entry in the collab, rather than something fleshed out. Looks like it's going to get a fleshing!

:raritystarry:

I'm in for the long read. This was great.

It is a shame that prudish ponysociety has gotten to Princess Cadance. As a mare, she should have no trouble finding sexual partners. She could use her pleasureseeking to be a good Samaritan:

Equus is full of colts who would like to be with a mare, but whose only sexual experiences have been with their right and left forehooves. She could turn those colts into stallions. ¡She could stallionify over a thousand colts annually! ¡Think about all of the good she could do and have fun doing it too!

I'm always glad to see more Twidance and this concept really is interesting. Eagerly waiting for more! :yay:

Hm... I think YES. Eagerly following and expecting updates.

4953127 :pinkiegasp: Ah! I found you!

4952638
Should have stuck with it! Fuzz had 6 or 8 entries in the TwiDance collab in this "Chemistry" series, all of which will be expanded to become chapters in this story.

4859011
Aaaaannnnnd... Featured! Nicely done, FF. Can't wait to see the expanded versions of these chapters. Based on the short sneak peeks we got in TwiDance, this'll be painfully epic.

4953708
Ugh, I wish I could keep up with the collabs, but they are sooooooooooo big. I can barely keep up with the Twisalis one, and I'm involved in that. I think I am currently about twenty odd chapters behind on that one! :raritydespair:

Nymphomania? Or something along those lines?
If so, she's incredibly lucky to have Shining Armor. It isn't exactly easy to find a guy that would stay in a relationship knowing about the chance for uncontrollable infidelity. Considering that "relapses" are apparently a thing, a bit more than chances. I'm almost afraid to see what happens to that relationship after Twidance kicks in.
Or does she subconsciously start firing love magic everywhere? Not exactly nymphomania, but it could have the same result.

4952618
Eventually there will be two of them.

4952625
Hush now, no spoilers!


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Glad you liked it! I've got seven more chapters in queue and while those are coming out I'm working on new content.

4956451
Something like that. Cadance's unique love powers are something of a concern when she has problems controlling herself. Shining has been a part of her coping mechanism for a long time. Expect to see some of that in coming chapters.

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I am fine, but I do not know what is wrong with the flankholes who thumbed down my comment. It is the perfect solution. It would make Princess Cadance happy and all of the colts going crazy from sexual frustration would not only be happy, but it would help their mental health too.

4957109

Yeah, I'm one of those assholes. It's pretty clear that you need one of those "psychologically-cleansing" hoofjobs, because your mental health is in question right now.

4957109 Yes, I am sure Cadance would be happy to have her addiction control her life. You know, It should have occurred to her that all that therapy and medication was totally unnecessary.

My, I think I need a bigger sarcasm sign.

In all seriousness, that kind of hormonal teenager fantasy you put up here should just stay in fetish literature.

4957176

Not to mention there are less than seven colts in Equestria. :derpytongue2:

Next chapter should be up sometime around 9/11/14.

9-11=2
Twilight sparkle has 2 eyes
Hitler has 2 eyes
Is Twilight Sparkle the new Hitler?

IT GOES DEEPER

Twilight = 8 letters
Cadance = 7 letters

8-7 is 1
The illuminati has 1 eye
IS TWILIGHTxCADANCE THE ILLUMINATI'S FAVOURITE SHIP?

4957370

STOP HIDING THE TRUTH
THE LOOMINITIES CONTROL US ALL

(What is this even)

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THAT MOONINITES, PLEB

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HERE, HAVE ONE FOR THE ROAD

THE ROAD TO HELL

4957187 Probably sitting somewhere together, cooking up ideas like that.

Drug The Gay Away

Also is this AU? They have microwaves and I think hands, right?

4958397
Nah, not any more AU than any other fanfic. Microwave seems inline with ponies' mish mash of tech. And it's all hooves, bby.

sometimes sex offenders as a condition of their release, have to take medication i to lower their libido.

just so all of you know.

also ... interesting...power corrupts and how it corrupts depends of course on what kind of power it was so if your power is to generate feelings of love.. well..

OH boy, I did see this in the other fic. Not gunna lie, the idea intrigues me, but moreover, it makes me wonder if other Alicorns run into such problems, or if it was just Cadence due to her circumstances in becoming one? I don't know, but overall, I'm very interested, and would love to see more.

So...What's wrong with Cadance?

It's a dark story, and it seems to be hinting towards something sexual? It can't be pedophilia, since Twilight is an Alicorn...

So... sex addiction? Is Candace a rapist?

4965623
Cadance is a recovering sex addict. It's something she'd been dealing with privately for years. You'll see more about in coming chapters.

I have no idea how I missed this being published. I should probably check my feed more often

4966657
lol, I've been working on it quietly in the background forever. I'm not surprised you didn't notice it.

4966105

Well you have my interest so far. Keep it up and I might feature you on my Fanfic Friday review, which doesn't always happen as weekly as I'd like :unsuresweetie:

But yeah, make an amazing story! :pinkiehappy:

So this is that dark story you've been plotting.
Looks interesting!
I've read the first chapter, and I'll leave it on my read later list so i can keep checking for updates, since I don't know if my watch will alert me to them or not.

4969585
If you fave it, you should get a notification of an update. I'll be posting new chapters weekly for a while.

Dark tag, eh? But not too dark, right? Dark-lite?

Unless of course Cadance really loses it and goes all S&M. Then that'd be /dark/. :rainbowderp:

I want to see where this is going :rainbowhuh:

Yes? YES!

Awesome start, by the way. :heart:

When I was writing my comment a moment ago there was an error - 'invalid item' or something. Turns out that you took the chapter down for a moment. :rainbowlaugh:

This is awesome. Moar. :heart::twilightblush:

I think you've got an extra sentence at the end, likely from google drive's comment system?

Call me hooked. I could see several directions for this to go with no clear path to any of them. Great job keeping us wanting more.

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