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Captain-Brony


Just a guy who wants to write/read some stories about ponies

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ONE SHOT!!! Queen Chrysalis was defeated by the power of Shining Armor and Princess Cadance's love. However, still being a threat Shining Armor goes to confront her head on. At first she doesn't seem all that scared to see him but what she fails to realize is that a Captain's duty is to deal with threats by any means necessary

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If there's a message to be learned here, its this: Never mess with Shining Armor's loved ones. Nice and simple, I like it:moustache:
Though it isn't really that dark enough to require that tag, but that's just me.

4439119 I know what you mean. :eeyup: But it was the one category which actually seemed to fit

That...was just plain creepy.

4469971 I guess the Dark category filter was appropriate then:moustache:

4470751 Laugh while you may, but still it's creepy seeing the brightest lights throw the darkest shadows.

4470879 That...is actually a good line:rainbowderp:

4471742 I have my moments of insight.

I love the way Shining put the fear of Celestia into Chrysalis... Never mess with Cadence or Twilight around him.

6095993 No really, don't do it! He takes it personally!!:flutterrage:

Yeah I know... They're the two most important ponies in his life, and Shining Armor definitely seems like the kind of Pony that will do whatever it takes to protect his loved ones, no matter what. Cadence is really lucky to have such a brave, caring stallion as her husband, and Twilight is lucky to have such a wonderful brother who's always there for her.

Well done shining. There's something slightly odd when they are discussing the whole hive mind and food sources. It just feels a little brief? Has shining seen changelings iin action before or did they capture a few after the wedding? He was rather out of it given the whole drained of love and mind controlled thing.

6133212 Well he had to run in to a few of them on his way to the queen

6138014 makes sense. There were an lot of changelings ejected from the wedding

Comment posted by Nestee88 deleted Jul 11th, 2015

6102526 except for the entirety of the whole first two seasons :rainbowlaugh:

I think my favorite part of this story is crystals' sense of humour
Shining armour wins though, with his one liner :

convenient promise coming from a channeling.

Over all, entertaining, and though it has the dark tag, it's a light read. Ha. I'll be sure to look at your other stories.

Nothing living only feeds on one thing, there needs to be variety in a diet.

Vampire Bats, Koalas, Giant Pandas.

9478359
an arguement can be made against those too............. by someone who isnn't me. Sorry that killed it for you

9478359
Out of those, only Koalas fit the argument. They're so specialised (and stupid) that they wont even eat eucalypt leaves that aren't on branches.

Vampire Bats eat any source of blood, and Pandas actually need to eat the bugs that live in the bamboo to get the protein they need. Heck, Pandas will kill and eat birds if they aren't getting enough protein (there's even a video on youtube somewhere with a Panda attacking and eating a goose that flew into the enclosure). Turned out that the zoos had been cleaning the bamboo that was being fed to the Pandas, meaning they weren't getting the protein they needed and thus the whole reason they weren't breeding.

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Well I have been told Koalas also eat their poop sooo...

Anyways, thanks for this.

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