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Word Painter


Im just another fanfiction writer having fun doing what I love.

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Celestia, not Luna, is going evil, and she slowly is changing the land from a diarchy to a dictatorship. Luna is then approached by a group of ponies who have a secret order that wants to take rule out of the evil hoof of Celestia and give it to Luna. The order believes that the evil sun that has scorched the land should set, to make room for the cool sweet moon. Luna does not want to hurt her sister, but if she does not act now, who knows what her sister will turn Equestria into?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 14 )

I love it!
Already composed the song!

Comment posted by Word Painter deleted Jun 9th, 2014

Isn't it The New Lunar Republic, not The New Luna Republic?

I really like the premise, but more than once I've noticed parts where you were rushing. It was very fast with almost no details, and you were telling, not showing. Try to make it seem less like a school essay and more like a story. But the idea seems great and I can't wait to see what you come up with next.:twilightsmile:

4551733 looking back I do rush (mostly because I forget to do it then friday night at like 10 o'clock I finally sit down and make myself finish it) reading your comment I decided this next chapter is going to be late because I needed more time to rely work on details and if I like the result enough ill set aside more time to write this fic and rally make it something special
- word painter

I'm liking this already.

4786086 invader Zim is awesome and gir is so adoribal

Why did you cancel? You should finish this.

"and others were on more important things, like creativity and other qualities that were not allowed in her"
Dang Aunt Celly you Cray-Cray

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