Twilight decides to write a free-verse poem for Rainbow Dash while she is away.
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Surry
A pool boy by trade. A rocker at heart. A writer by soul. And not afraid to show my face.
Surry
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Well, I think I like it... not thinking about it actually, I do like it.
Cute
That was beautiful.
Old username reference
It was a very cute story.
Might want to change it to completed. unless you are continuing on with this amazing story? Which of course I wouldn't be opposed to.
Lol. You had to add it, didn't you?
Aaaahh! There's poo all over my eyes! Why, Surry? Why diarrhea?
Lol. I kid. I kid. It was good. 
4433515 I absolutely loved that reference!
Another great story!
This was very nice, but I'm a sucker for vanilla poetry.
4433515 I wish I knew Surry before he was just Surry. Oh well, he will always be the Surrendered Endeavor I suppose.
Anyway, that poem was almost as awesomely adorable as Bassie when he...
...never mind.
This story could tie in with the other story you wrote, correct? Maybe even Voices?
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4433515 Thanks, guys.
4434854 I know what happened.
And no, I don't think so. The only tie-in to Voices will involve Celestia and a certain (destructive) unicorn.
4434854 I think it'd tie in with the other one-shots he's done lately quite well.
Edit: Stop making me blush. lol
4434977 I'm writing one now that's actually NOT a TwiDash, as hard as that may be to believe.
4434990 Really?
What is it?
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4435185 Discord has a nice, friendly chat with Tirek. (sarcasm)
4435607 Lol. That oughta' be funny...or intense.
4436243 Intense would be what I'm going for.
4437466 Intense it is!
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4437469 Yep! And I'm not gonna' be on much tonight. My friend is having some kind of party or something, and I gotta' bring my guitar.
4437475 Have to, or want to?
4437511 I wanted to. We always talked about it. I don't know anymore. This week has been hell, and then I work 12 hours tomorrow.
4437520 Shit. Well, is your friend going to pay you for the gig?
4437708 No gig. We just jammed.
4439091 Oh, well that's always fun too.
I didn't know you could be so poetic. So, how long did it take to write the poem, because I feel like it took a long time, considering it's size.