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Considering how it ended for Sombra on the real show, I do sense a twist by the end of this episode remake.
4898691 Let's just say... Sombra has a vital role to play further into the story
I like this, it sort of answers a question I asked before. Celestia, while aware that Midnight has foreknowledge from the tv show, she herself doesn't seem to know the details of the actual episodes. That wasn't clear before. Also seems the history of this version of Equestria is influenced by the canon book journal of the two sisters, but also silly fillies fan animation, fall of the crystal empire. That's a great choice of source material, they work we'll together.
Another thing I like compliment you on is the improvements on style, I really like it when you thrown in a bit of extra character and detail, like the aside comment Midnight thought when compairing the weight of Twilights saddle bages to Big Mac.
Holy crap... I can't wait to read what you have planned... It's gonna be epic
I like how you used both CHildren of the Night and Fal of the Crystal Empire as Background source material, and wow, Midnight truly doesn't remember shattering discord? whoa
4899339 Celestia removed him doing that from his, and everybody else's, memories, I think she also erased what he did to the D-Dogs from his memory.
4899339 The reason he duzent remember blasting Discord to smithereens is because Celestia sealed that memory from his andthe others' minds, partly to protect Midnight as well as make sure he wasn't alienated
4899224 Okay, you might be right, but you have to remember this is Blaze's story in an Alternate Universe, not everything has to be Canon, he can change whatever he wants as long as it fits into his story.
4899261 The curse came from Sombra, only he can remove it. All the Elements did was return Luna from being Nightmare Moon
4899339 Also, I used Children of the Night and an alternative tale to explain an origin of both the Lunar Ponies and the Crystal Ponies
4900677 I see then. Good call on the Princess' part. but really? Asking him to try to CAPTURE her Ex-Coltfriend? Just how in the name of Faust is it remotely a good idea to bring the snarling near incoherent mass of darkness to BUCKING CANTERLOT?!
4899224 I know that, but in her madness I think love and adoration was the last thing Nightmare Noon cared about
4900689 I'm all for it dude. I love children of the Night. I also love Snowdrop by Silly Filly Studios, but I never saw a good part to bring her up.
4898753 She doesn't know because she locked the memories away, she didn't go through them. Also don't forget 'The Children of The Night' By Duo Cartoonist
The first 55 seconds is where he got part of it from.
4900702 Sorry, I didn't think about her, and even in retrospect I can't think of how I could have fit her into Celestia's story
4900910 It's alright. I understand. Snowdrop isn't exactly a pony Celestia can just idly mention. Snowdrop was much closer to Luna anyway.
4900691 even gling by other fan fics it leans more to my point. she might forget the true goal at a moment but it was always there
4901201 Well jealousy, feeling like second fiddle, and unappreciated are certainly lousy but I'm just sayin' all this seems a little more understandable for Luna's treacherous transformation.
But, to each his own eh? Hope you'll keep reading
4901713 It's a gray area for me on this one. i hate the parasite Nightmare moon use for that really weakens Luna. Pats Sins interpretation gets it oerfectly for me and this is not a deal breaking thing for me on this story..
4899216 Or... I could have just waited till the next chapter... this is what happens when you find a story late...
At some point, Luna should be made fertile again, because baby Luna's would be too adorable an opportunity to pass up.
What... When did the Wolf Among Us come into play? Lol jk.
6048915 Luna will have a child in the future
Screwing with time like this will have consequences. Some good, but potentially MORE bad. Once it gets to a certain point it won't matter how much of the original show he's seen because it will take a completely different path.
We interrupt your regularly scheduled ‘E’ rated fanfic to give you this storyline on how Sombra cheated on Celestia
Your ‘E’ rated fanfic will continue soon
I couldn't help but think about power rangers. Those bands and how they work make me think of the morphers.
All I can say is "Damn." O_O
Hoooooly shit that's some fucked up stuff.......
Nice character and world building in this chapter!
someone probably mentioned this, but inst there a plot-hole because of nightmare night? With Midnight dressing as sombra even though Celestia said to erase all info about him
(god this is long)