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I don't think that apostrophe after that has a purpose, or does it?
Would italicizing apply be a good idea? Everytime I read that sentence I automatically put emphasis on apply, since she thinks he's unlikely to have the adoption go through due to her superiors.
There's two spaces after do.
Now he's got a Wolf-Puppy. I will hug him, and stroke him, and cuddle him, and sing to him, and call him George! I love wolves. Also other than the obvious 'find a way for Midnight and the pup to bond, seeing as he's still wild' I can't think of anything.
4612755 Revisions done, and I can see the nod towards the looney tunes
I already have a name picked for the pup and have plans although I will admit Applejack doesn't exactly warm up to the pup at first
OMG YOU SHOULD CALL THE PUP NIGHTFANG!!!!!!!!! plzz
AND this is a great chapter
4615900 ?...Nnnno.
I sed I have a name picked already, but thnx for your... Positive feedback
srry for being overly excited
4615920 No big, but hav u any suggestions about Midnight wanting to adopt Twinken as his legal little brother?
i get excited when i get good ideas sooooooo........
srry again
4615926 Have u any idea how self-contradictory that sounds?
OH it would be funny if Blueblood was one of TLC superiors, but on the twinken part ummm
*thinks awhile* im srry but i cant think of any thing, BUT ON A DIFF NOTE YOU GET LIKE 20 OF THESE
I DO NOT CARE IM LIKE 50% AS RANDOM AS PINKIE
4615936 Well u might be surprised with what I have planned for Blueblood at the gala. I only hinted so to somepony and they gave me so much flak I blocked them
MAKE BLUEBLOOD HURT plz
4616043 Ehhhh.... yeah, that's... not exactly what I'm planning
*long exhale* have someone make him hurt at least a little
I'm juast wondering... where is Winnona? I can't remember that she was mentioned in the Story.
4616776 I'm gonna bring her up, for the farm's new addition. I'm just unsure how she'll react to a wolf pup, hostile becuz it's a wolf? Or motherly since it's still a puppy
4616146 Just wait n' see
4617951 Why not a combination? First, she is a bit hostile and unsure of this new addition to the family. Then she becomes motherly as she learns, it was still a pup. You could even try to write it from the animals POV. I'm sure Fluttershy would love it
4618000 Yes to the first one, unlikely to the second one but thnx
4616146 Sorry it's not gonna happen... Though I WILL have Midnight threaten Blueblood at some point, a threat that ends with the prince being turned into a gelding, if he hurts Rarity LOL
I honestly think that a love interest for Midnight is in order, then again I'm still behind on the story so there may already be one. I really want Midnight to be able to adopt Twinken.
“He does so much for us,” Midnight commented with a smile when Pinkie cracked, “And now the punch has been… spiked!”
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I want Midnight and Twilight Sparkle, I mean, it’s likely not gonna happen (however, I haven’t read the whole story yet,) but it seems pretty natural.