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Great chapter, excepting one thing. This quote is hard to read because you didn’t start a new line everytime a new character started talking. I also can’t tell which pony is speaking, a fix of this would be very welcome.
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That's kinda the point, to make the conversation sound (or I guess look) a little cluttered together
Several of the defunct headcanons floating around on here always had the CMC with separate marks; not matching. Frankly I always found this to be far superior than where the show took it.
Twinken use talk no jutsu and is super effect
Good chapter. Twinken's cutiemark is an interesting one. And It makes me wonder what cutiemarks you have planned for the rest of the CMC.
More please
Is there or will there ever be a chapter where midnight meets his human family again and they meet his pony family
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No
All the superlatives have been used by others in the previous chapters. So unless I want to further gild the lily I will refrain and stick to finding the spots where Murphey has put his hoof in.
"that Twinken will now development an appetite for meat. [develop ]
Diamond Tiara had no icea her mother was approaching, [idea]
What about the others? Won't they get their cutie marks?