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Well earlier, there were two of them chasing a pair of dummies into your town because they trespassed in the Dragon's den. What's one more, AJ?
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That's always going to be the main challenge for someone writing a follow-the-story fanfic.
you might wanna fix that
even though this is technically accurate, rarity should still use '-pony' like a second nature habit, even if she corrects herself right after.
another example. make a new paragraph for each new character.
You know what I find interesting? Angel. He's named Angel but doesn't act it, more like a bratty kid, but he's also a contradiction to himself a lot. Reason being, he may pick on Fluttershy his caretaker a lot, but he's also the very first animalto her defense if she's ever in serious trouble. I can't help but give him the love/hate consideration.
where was that jump??????????/
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Angel-Bunny is a legit Tsundere.