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A wonderful finish to Apple Family Reunion. But I noticed that about half of the chapter ended up in italics
5175813 Fixed it
5175832 Glad to see that.
Didn't see the proposal coming
Excellent chapters. this apple family reunion was by far the best chapter arc yet. I really enjoyed the emotions that were played out in this arc. Emotions is what I really enjoy in any story and this arc gave a crucial one that all adopted family members have to face. I really liked the proposal at the end as I really enjoy romance just as much as emotions in a story. Excellent chapter arc and I look forward to the next one.
Wow, very nice twist towards the end there, well played! Definitely your best remake episode so far.
But I wonder how the newly engaged relationship between Big Mac and Fluttershy will be tested when Keep Calm & Flutter On arrives.
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I'll find a way
I'm becoming very intrigued about the hooded pony. The way you're building him up makes me want to know a lot more about him and how midnight can supposedly help/save him.
5178027 Wouldn't you like to know...?
Is it wrong to say that I was tearing up during the chapter?
And all the t Big Mac and Flutters Marriage!
You also get two up!
5179091 Thnx so much
I love this story!
What do you do when your door is unbreakable? You bash a hole in the wall next to it.
Interesting twist on the "two shooting stars" final scene...
i.imgur.com/sogLIeT.jpg
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I'm starting to think it's either Midnight after a botched time-travelling spell, or it's Starswirl somehow.
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No, because Arbiter (it's what the hooded pony told Cadence to call him) had a childhood in Equestria. As evidenced by his angry conversation with Celestial (What I call Celestia). Unless he found a way of two way transport between worlds, went to Earth to give birth to T.G. Wolven (What Midnights pen name was on Earth), and then came back and had a family of his own (he has a locket with pictures of a family, a pony family) and then became important, you are wrong.
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I think it could be the first one. Perhaps trying to guide events to a similar outcome as the one he came from, in order to give "himself" the family he had. And then at that stage, he would step in and prevent the time travel spell from being used.
Although, it can't be him, because in his angry conversation with Celestial, he mentioned either knowing her at childhood (might be weakened Starswirl) or her knowing him at childhood (either Sombra or someone I don't know or an OC).
I still think Arbiter is a future Sombra. After all, Night did cleanse the darkness from Sombra.
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Wait a minute!? ARBITER!?
Were it so easy...
My current guess about Arbiter:
I definitely think Arbiter is related to Twinken or Midnight. Maybe he’s Midnight and Twilight’s progeny? Maybe he’s here as a product of Starlight’s time spell. He did mention a plan a millennia in the making and seems to have future knowledge like Midnight does…