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I think I know who the inspector is.
I thank you for having Midnight take Pinkie's mouth away.
Oh and there's a spelling mistake here:
I'm sure you were meant to say good.
Hmm. . . nope, lost it.
I didn't expect that Glide was the inspector.
5157278 Huh?
OH COME ON you quit there!? the episode is almost over
5157425 I was going to say something, but forgot what I was going to say before I could type it.
So yeah, I lost my train of thought.
Sorry.
5158038
Happens. Must've hit the 'o' key before hitting the 'p' key.
It's alright though, I sometimes type 'the' as 'teh'.
That music come in my mind:
You know, I'm going to say this.
Lightning Dust is one of my fave characters in the show. There's a reason why I made her part of my own alt-verse. I never really saw her as malicious. Honestly, she'd make a great althlete. Just not a military sort, really. That's partly her own fault, as she's always trying to better herself and be the best that she can be, but she has no one to reel her back. To tell her that she's going too far.
So yeah, her 'cockiness' and rude behavior was just being encouraged by Spitfire, so it made it worse.
Oh snap!
Just thought I would make a comment before I read on and see if you are the exception here.
One thing nopony that I have seen has addressed in their stories is that the "friends" nearly wiped out were VIPs; The EoH (and GoH) themselves!
If they do not hold an 'honorary' rank (more or less) equal to a Wonderbolt, just so the Top Brass can legally give them orders in an emergency, Celestia is holding a bigger Idiot Ball than I thought.
One of the cornerstones of Equestrian Kaiju Defense was nearly made useless with the possible deaths of some of the EoH/GoH, along with the Favored Student of Celestia and.. in your tale, a Prince of the Realm too. This has never been brought up in the reasons for Lightning Dust being kicked out outright. $#i7 rolls downhill and I cant wait to read if you pull it off bigtime!
Welp, somepony is fired!
I know it’s not intentional, but I cannot take Whiplash’s name seriously, after all...
HE’S ACTING LIKE A MANIAC!
((Big music fan, if you couldn’t tell))
(Reaches for the OH $#;+ button from myinstants.com) Been a while since I used this...