Like a neglected and dejected pup, I roam. Also known as Swimmingly "Herr Direktor" Choppingston.
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Oh boy... feelin a manly tear well up. A couple cases of no caps capitalization, and you wrote balling instead of bawling, common homophone. Other than that, I liked it!
4433951 I shall fix my errors thank you for your time.