• Published 21st May 2014
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Pony Poems 2 - Toffee Bean

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ch 7: The rising moon

The Rising moon

The moon rises,
the sun sets,
the bat ponies come out,
they come to play,
they come to see,
they rule the night,
they live in the dark,
but so many fear them,
so many hate them,
why I do not know,
but I only want to be liked,
all I want is a friend,
a normal pony friend,
but they fear me,
they run from me,
why I do not know,
all I wanted was a normal pony friend,
but all I get is fear a pawn their faces,
they run,
why I do not know,
all I wanted was to have a friend,
a normal pony fiend,
one that would play,
one that would laugh with me,
one that would stay no matter what,
but all I get is fear on their faces,
why I do not know,
but I do know I am who I am
but my time has come,
the sun is rising once again,
I will be back,
back when the moon rises once again.

Comments ( 29 )

Ok, cool poems but... what exactly makes it A New World, a New Way story?

4442851 don't know, beside, most of these talk about ponies and their new life's.

4442863 then why'd you add it to the group?

4442876 don't know I was just adding it to random groups, but still I don't see why you wouldn't want poetry in the group.

4442891
Simple really. Cause stories in this group HAVE to be related to A New World, A New Way, and random poetry just doesn't cut it

4443189 and who said it's not.

Comment posted by Toffee Bean deleted May 25th, 2014

4443381 for one I'm your biggest member, two, my poems are very good, and people are likely to join a group with good to read things, three you didn't say what can and what can't be added on your group, four because you like them, five I live in the USA a free nation.

4781189
again, i dont see this in my notifications...

it was about batt pony so first what come on my mind was Speck :twilightsmile:

4781227 but how is that creepy?

4781243
emmm... misunderstanding

Chapter five is creepy... why? should i find some picture to descibre?:scootangel:

and that about Speck is to Chapter three :twilightsmile:

4781271 how is Ch 5 creepy?

4781339 how that related pinkie never song a song with happy, but smile, smile, smile?

4781350
nevermind... its just how i see it :twilightsmile:

4781369 okay, why don't you come play with me?

4781376
I'd like to :twilightsmile:

Edit: it sounds creepy... maybe im in "everything is creepy" mood

4781380 me too I was trying to make it creepy after all I am your worst nightmare

4781405 we should do this in a PM

4781414
we realy should... but that isn't fun :twilightsmile:

4781418 it's not, but I would like to keep the comments here about my poems, plus RPing isn't allowed her.

4781442 oh, okay we can stay here

4781449 okay i'll be gone for 2 hours then i'll be back

I think I will try to put in the effort of reading this story as well.

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