Commander Scott has just prevented humanity from destroying the universe, at great cost. Can he prevent the ponies from doing so as well, once they discover a spell capable of the same? Will he manage to stop a war on a foreign planet, and bring peace to two warring civilizations?
The tragedy and teen rating is mostly about the fact that humanity is destroyed in chapter one and the gore is about a battle near the end.
Sorry for the... 'angry yelling' that used to be in the description. In hindsight, I haven't the faintest idea how I thought that was a good idea.
Chapters (7)
Oh I like the concept thus far. I like how the batton of responsibility it passed fro. Humanity to ponykind
It appears many people don't like this story due to the fact that it involves the destruction of humanity and all the power being passed onto the ponies. All I gotta say is "Hater Gonna Hate"
4492010 Yeah... When I saw all the dislikes, it only took me a couple seconds to realize that was the cause. I saw another good story with destruction of humanity, also had tons of dislikes.
4492416 What was it called?
I probs won't read this any time soon, but I'll chuck you a like :)
DAMNIT PEOPLE DON'T READ IF YOU DON'T LIKE HUMANITY BEING DESTROYED! READ THE GOD DAMN NOTE!!!!!!
4495587 Actually I jus added that last night when I hit complete... But people are still clicking. Two more dislikes over night, even with the warning.
4492819 Sorry, was before I got an account. Keep looking, It's there!
4495838 Oka I'll keep looking.
Good concept.... but the dialogue and writing in general makes this entirely unenjoyable
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In all fairness, I did write this... a long, long, time ago. Perhaps one day I’ll revisit it... but unlikely. I have more concepts than time to write them, and few liked this at all.
a little short but Awesome writing
chapters are way way WAAAY to short
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It was my first story :) I didn’t know what I was doing very well. I hope you enjoyed it regardless!