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His defeat marked the day when the citizens of the Crystal Empire where declared freed. Accepting their new princess and prince the once former empire became the primary source for all jewels shipped across Equestria. A renaissance occurred brining enlightenment to the ponies expanding their minds, allowing them to see what they could accomplish. With each passing year Sombra faded, yet with each passing year he became stronger, his spirit gaining more power.

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I think that I may have missed something. Are you sure this is the first chapter?

agree with StarLight Nova I think there something missing b/c I feel like there is a charter missing. But King Sombra "making" Shining Armor his apprentice is a very good ides/ twist :3

4560258 Thank you and I'm currently working on the "first chapter" it should be up by either today or early tomorrow morning.

Comment posted by I DONT LIKE MLP NO MORE deleted Jun 19th, 2014

So we getting a prequel and a sequel? nice:pinkiehappy:.

4594701 A sequel in which are lovely King Sombra corrupts Princess Luna

4594750 Isn't that more like a prequel? I mean Sombra is dead. oh,oh his ghost comes back to haunt his thousand years old lover :pinkiegasp:. YaY:rainbowlaugh:. Can't wait to see what you will do with the entire plot you set up:twilightsmile:.

4594862 Yes if you like to know more you could message me.

4594933 I think I would rather keep guessing. Don't want to spoil the story for my self.

4560362Yes do it, we need more good corruption stories on here. I have got to say, good story, but the grammar and slight lack of detail do detract from it a bit. Interesting note, there is a vocal of a corrupted Shining Armor, either this was inspired by it or matches it perfectly.

5625442 I orginally had a plan in which I made a trilogy but I lost my editors and interest. I honestly do want to continue this but I don't know where to start.

5626682 Well, I don't write on this site, but my advice would be to look for new editors wherever you can and try to get your mind back into the flow of the story.

Do. The. Sequel. :flutterrage:
(Him, if that's okay with you :fluttershysad:)

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