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If you need someone to go through a story with a fine toothed comb and find every single error with your grammer, ask me.

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Captain Soarwing was a simple Avian (avian?) in the beta sector. He frequently took adventures and went on spelunking journeys. That all changed when a distress signal made him change course and land on the planet it was coming from. When he and his crew got to the signal they came under fire from apex scientists. The leader of the apex threw a plasma grenade and blew the Captain into oblivion! Then this happened...

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Oooh, this is good. Finally, a avian showed up.

Well, that was interesting. A little hasty but quite entertaining. I hope you planning some space travel for the near future, after our avian hero build a spaceship out of nowhere.
Oh and another stuff. Please buddy, promise me you make a proper first contact conversation with the princesses and a mane six. Ok, except for Fluttershy but you know what i mean. Anyway, keep up the good work.

I will gladly accept all ideas and critism :twilightblush:

4414686 I will try to make that happen and the next chapter will be this weekend, I will also try to make longer chapters

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