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Captain Hurricane


Man, writing stories is hard! I wish I had more time to write....the life of a full time college, full time worker leaves little leisure for storytelling :(

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The Land of Monsters, Minova, is the home of the minotaur tribes and other monstrous creatures. Two Minovan brothers once sought to take every ounce of magic from the faraway kingdom of Equestria. But the younger brother, Scorpan, fell in love with Equestria and one of its leaders. When Scorpan is forced to choose between his brother and his friends, he makes a decision that carries a terrible cost.

Also read these awesome stories featuring Starswirl and Scorpan:

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/207200/the-visitor
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54950/the-last-human-a-tale-of-the-preclassical-era

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Well, if you're going by the show's logic, yes.

Two Minovan brothers once sought to take every ounce of magic from the faraway kingdom of Equestria. But the younger brother, Scorpan, fell in love with Equestria and one of its leaders. When Scorpan is forced to choose between his brother and his Equestrian friends, will he find the courage to follow his heart?

I'd love to see this one written out.

Good chapter really good needs to be longer!

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I'm glad you like it. It's really hard to find a good stopping point. I've got a little bit more written, but I like where it ended. The next update might take a while, but it's going to be at least 5k words.

Well I certainly like this.:twilightsmile:
But is the realm of Minova inhabited by only (or mostly) minotaurs? Or are there other demonic/hybrid human-beast creatures that live here? I mean, Tirek is a horned centaur, and Scorpan is.....well, Scorpan (though some sources I've found label him as a gargoyle).
Anyways, glad to have found this fic. I plan to do an A/U that involves Scorpan in Equestria (during the return of NMM).

Sooooo....Does that mean the Chimera from 'Somepony to watch over me' similar to this one?

Wow....interesting way to connect with the 'dark magic bag' (that always made a noise as if the Telltale Heart was inside it) from G1.

Well I certainly like this.:twilightsmile: I'm glad you like it!

But is the realm of Minova inhabited by only (or mostly) minotaurs? Or are there other demonic/hybrid human-beast creatures that live here? I mean, Tirek is a horned centaur, and Scorpan is.....well, Scorpan (though some sources I've found label him as a gargoyle). Things that would considered "monsters" in the canon would probably live in or near Minova- minotaurs, changelings, chimeras, dragons, griffons, etc.
In my headcanon, anyway, manticores are a bit more feral and live in the Everfree, although they are related to chimeras (Who are all descended from Discord, either genetically, or in spirit).

Anyways, glad to have found this fic. I plan to do an A/U that involves Scorpan in Equestria (during the return of NMM). I hope to have inspired you!:raritywink:

I know I'm getting ahead of things here, but I imagine the bestowement of Scorpan's medallion to Tirek not as a tiding of friendship, but rather as a definitive declaration that he is leaving his brother's company for good, and wishes to end their association entirely.

What a bold move that would be, as well as a turning point that would irreversibly change their relationship, forever.

I'm eager to see where this goes.

... is this story dead? I was really enjoying it.

PLEASE CARRY ON!!! PLLEAASE!!!


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I'd love to; it's so hard to write for me right now because I'm doing other horse stuff. I will return to this story eventually, once boredom grips me firmly and has me enthralled, and I can envision its proper ending.

There will be an end, and you'll find what awaits Twilight. The hiatus has given me a reason to write but becoming #horsefamous is a full time job, trust me.
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It's not dead yet. It's getting better.

Great work on this.

This was adorable.

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