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Apocalypse Pony


Fic for the Writer's Training Ground
Week 15 Theme: Nightmare Night

When Lyra perfects the spell of her dreams, there's nothing stopping her on a night in which everypony looks obscure

Chapters (1)
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The story? Great! A lyra and bonbon story without the two being lesbians? Excellent! Want more!

Wow, you are so cool, Lyra! Those _hands_ of yours awesomely precize!

#3 · Oct 26th, 2011 · · ·

18551 They may theoretically be lesbians in this story. It's generally accepted they are, and it's not mentioned that they're not, so they probably are in this story.

A Lyra with hands fic... I'm okay with this. :pinkiesmile:

true, I'm just glad someone made a fic without their supposed relationship being the focus. Not that the relationship exists at all, but i guess that's the fan base we've got.

I must admit, the first thing I thought of when I read about the disproportionate beefiness of Lyra's man-hands was this.

Also, horses have hair, not fur. Minor nitpick, but it's one of my pet peeves.:derpytongue2:

And here I was paranoid that I was making bad transitions and felt that the concert segment was pointless. Seems it's been well accepted :pinkiehappy:

Then again, I never did point out that I was seeking critique :facehoof:


Oh god. This is so funny and the last line nearly broke me. Bahahaha

18776 I am going to get down on my knees and worship you. You are the first person that I have ever seen say that apart from me. It makes me want to hurt something when people use fur for ponies. it's either hair or a coat.

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