Thousands of years following the story of Archmage, Twilight takes on a new student. One who doesn't know the first thing about advanced magic. One who needs to start from Square One.
Prophecies are so weird in this universe. It is like the universe is making a childish demand and will throw a tantrum if it doesn't get it. The unicorn WILL be an alicorn or things go boom!
I can see you oh no not subtle foreshadowing. Star's going to go find the Elements from wherever they've been lost to just like that freaking library, hmm? And how much you wanna bet that Star is the new Element of Magic? I bet the prophecy goes something like this.
"Star Caster will rebirth the Elements and do some crazy awesome weird thing. If she doesn't you'll all pretty much die."
I do believe this chapter is called the Initiating Incident. Or whatever klablooey you call it. Basically, it's gonna get real pretty soon.
4473772 I know, I am shocked ponies still use it. I mean sure, the princesses or somepony gets to know something big is going to happen one day. But that comes with the *footnote: It WILL happen this way, no matter how bloody and gory, and if you try to change or save even 1 little person, your entire plane of existance will end, period.
You know what, I think I do have to agree with Star on that one, that was a dick move luna. "If you'll excuse me, i'm leaving to find out why your part of the most important prophecy in over 3,000 years, oh yeah, did I mention it's mostly about you. Well that's too bad I can't tell you anything about it!!! :)"
I’m married to a pegasus on the local weather team.
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u get the idea. Rarity was my long-lost relative, and Rainbow Dash hers.
You need to go back and change Archmage. Since you state in the fic that Rainbow Dash never had children. (Neither did Flutters. Unless that changed too.).
But as far as Twilight could tell, Rainbow Dash and Archer were never close after that again. Archer was too devoted to the protection of Equestria, and Rainbow Dash was too much of a free spirit to settle down with him. She continued to tour with the Wonderbolts until her retirement, when she became a flight school instructor of incredible renown. However, her busy lifestyle kept her from falling in love again, and she had no children of her own.
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Ks. Other than a little bit that needs retconning. This was a pretty spiffy chapter.
DUN DUNNNNNNNNN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN Prophecy time!!
Is Spearhead descended from Shining?
I have a feeling I am going to enjoy Spearhead.
Not a bad chapter.
Also, prophecies are dicks.
Prophecy? Twilight should tell Star about her prophecy....
Prophecies are so weird in this universe. It is like the universe is making a childish demand and will throw a tantrum if it doesn't get it. The unicorn WILL be an alicorn or things go boom!
Oh my more prophecy eh? You just turned things up again Loyal.
I can see you oh no not subtle foreshadowing. Star's going to go find the Elements from wherever they've been lost to just like that freaking library, hmm? And how much you wanna bet that Star is the new Element of Magic? I bet the prophecy goes something like this.
"Star Caster will rebirth the Elements and do some crazy awesome weird thing. If she doesn't you'll all pretty much die."
I do believe this chapter is called the Initiating Incident. Or whatever klablooey you call it. Basically, it's gonna get real pretty soon.
Spoiler warning? maybe? If you read the first Archmage you should know this so anyway.
Wait a minute... "and she had no children of her own." this is from the first Archmage regarding Rainbowdash.
What could this mean about Lotus?
4474134 Ssshh! The Elements are immortal, the old cougar probably found someone
Prophecy time!!
"Stopped my invisibility practice"
Loyal, you dun it again
4475131
wat?
4475133 Spear was just standing there invisible the whole time xD
Another ton of awesomeness!
4475188
oh.
yeah.
okay. >. <
I think you can see the mistake
4475188 yeah that one was good!
Commence read.
And then Prophecy.
But...what about...
Nope. PROPHECY! Mwhahahah.
Other ramblings and whatnot.
Hey, where's spike/chronos?
Or has that not happened yet?
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that actually happened several thousand years ago.
4473772 I know, I am shocked ponies still use it. I mean sure, the princesses or somepony gets to know something big is going to happen one day. But that comes with the *footnote: It WILL happen this way, no matter how bloody and gory, and if you try to change or save even 1 little person, your entire plane of existance will end, period.
You know what, I think I do have to agree with Star on that one, that was a dick move luna. "If you'll excuse me, i'm leaving to find out why your part of the most important prophecy in over 3,000 years, oh yeah, did I mention it's mostly about you. Well that's too bad I can't tell you anything about it!!! :)"
4479337 Twilight mentioned him a few chapters ago not sure exactly when.
god I'm loving this.
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DAMN IT NIGHT!!!
I was reading too much into, but not too far off
Cap.
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You need to go back and change Archmage. Since you state in the fic that Rainbow Dash never had children. (Neither did Flutters. Unless that changed too.).
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Ks. Other than a little bit that needs retconning. This was a pretty spiffy chapter.