This story is a sequel to Dear Derpy
The Doctor has to leave another one of his companions. But this one is different. This mare was just like the cross eyed mare that he left behind in the same world that he couldn't find. But a secret leads to a key happiness for the Doctor. Rose knows that he was upset and she tries to make it up to him, but when they said goodbye, this was her chance to tell him the secret that she was keeping from him. Can she tell him? Or will she tell him too late? *based off of the final episode of Rose Tyler*
Chapters (7)
I was going to leave this comment on the second chapter, but then there were two more chapters, and they weren't that long so I'll leave it here.
Then I needed to go, don't worry I'll post my full comment later k?
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I am going to regret reading this so much. oh well
Needs improvements, for example; "Bravest HUMAN"
Should be pony
Other then that it was great
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Thank you for the notice! Fixed!
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No, thank YOU for the story
Due to this story I might be making a parody. If you want more info about it just PM me
4523294 I never expected something like this! Thank you for the unexpected! All I would need is just a link to it when it's done, and to be credited is all I ask... Oh thank you!
This makes me think of the song Doomsday.
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Then again, Doomsday was in this episode...
Er, not to correct this wonderful story, but I do believe the more common term is 'Cybercolts'
I luvd dis stry. Will giv it a thums up and fav it.
4534484 I can fix that, thank you for letting me know.