• Member Since 14th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Sep 22nd, 2016

Astral Sketch


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Despite being so close to victory Tirek was defeated by Twilight Sparkle and her friends. Beaten and stripped of his power he is now back in Tartarus were he will spend the rest of his days. Now all he has is time. This is his testament, his story written by him so that anyone who might find it will know the reason why he committed his crimes.

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Comments ( 3 )

It's great, but there are serious grammar errors: Missing commas, I think some apostrophes, etc.

4405988 I think I need a better editor

4406167

Definitely, and a proofreader.

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