One knight against a horde of unclean foes. Spike, the mighty dragon knight, stands alone in the face of this menace. Will he prevail or will his realm fall to foes that only he can stop?
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A good story. Okay, that got me to laugh at the end (the Dark tag had me worried...) Dishes as the mightiest foe Equestria has ever faced! Cheers!
Spoiler tag added to keep the secret!
Alexander Pope would be proud.
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Alexander Who what now?
*google* Oh.
I are classically challenged!
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I had to look it up as well. Thanks to the both of you.
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I had to look him up too to make sure he was the one who wrote The Rape of the Lock.
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The... The what? I'm terrified, concerned, and... confused.
I'm guessing it's something about how the key fits into the lock. But maybe that's just my mind going... places. Hot key on lock action! With a twist!
*turns key*
4401854 Wrong lock.
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Yis. I have been edified. 'Twas a lock of hair.
4401854 Just curious... did you get Rainbowfied when you turned that key?
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*mumbles* 'm actually turning it into a story.
Spike is living the dream alright: smiting evil, one dish at a time.
4402415 Really? I'll have to give that one a read once it is done. I can see things going really wrong, really fast.
4402415 That's the spirit!
it definitly deserved a fav
I think you have nailed Spike on the head here. The bit at the end only made it better. Have a like and a ribbon:
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4960230 Thank you very much, Sir Truffles. This is greatly appreciated. I am glad to know you enjoyed it.
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You are very welcome. Enjoy your ribbon
All right zodiac! Congrats on getting into Twilight's Library!
4960580 I thank you very much. It is one of those important things that lets me know that my work is appreciated and enjoyed. That is my goal. Thanks again!
Cheers!
This should be breathe.
4961759 Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out.
This review is brought to you on behalf of the group: Authors Helping Authors
Name of Story: Alone on the Tundra
Grammar: 8
Pros
Twist ending
Cheesy over the top don quixote type descriptions/dialogue
Exactly how I would think Spike would picture himself being a knight
Cons (list three cons)
Just a couple of errors that I saw (see notes)
Notes:
Spike winced in revulsion as he beheld the fell creature: I'm not sure you meant "fell" unless that is supposed to be some form of fake old knight English...
Taking its attention off of Spike
Couple of spaces where they don't belong at the beginning of a couple of the lines...
*****
Can I be honest? I went right past this story a half a dozen times because of that cheesy title pic. Sooo wish I hadn't taken so long to find this gem...
5039762 I thank you for the honest review and glad to know you like it so much. That is a great thing to start my day. Did you have a story in turn you want me to review as per AHA?
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Oops...forgot a step: The Last Keeper of Harmony
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5758719 Thanks so much for that! Glad to know my story was enjoyable to read.
Cheers!
This was excellent bud. We liked how detailed the combat scenes were, it was almost like watching an episode of MLP. Well done.