Starswirl the Bearded meets Scorpan, while roaming a forest.
Written for the #20 EQD Writer's Training Ground and is sadly not finished yet.
This is written to improve my writing, so any (remotely constructive) criticism is welcome.
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dredaich
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Quite good so far. A few grammar mistakes here and there, but overall quite good. I hope to see more of this.
4401595 If you point out my mistakes to me, I'll correct them. I might even learn something if you do so. I want to write more, but since I'm a slow writer (and there are two other stories that I want to update too) it will take some time.
Oh my goodness! I really love this!!! I also pictured Scorpan not being effected and not having any magic!!! Seings as Tirek is so vulnerbale to it and pretty much decides the form of his whole being! Really good! If you ever decide to carry on, I'd love coming back to it every time! If you think you want to carry on but want some help, I'd be glad to!
6735986 Glad you like it.
I do have some stuff written (about another 1k words)... but I'll need more to publish.
I guess I need some external push to work on my stories
I guess I'll have some time to write between this sunday and new year. So poke me then and we can see how to further this story.
6739131 OK!!! Will do! How do ya wanna go about it?
6742267 That depends on the way you want to help.
Do you intend to be...
... person to poke me long enough that I get something written?
... proof reader?
... editor?
... muse for inspiration?
... co-writer?
6752926
I'd quite like to be co-writer or muse for inspiration! Poker just seems annoying.