My name is Cloudy mane and I'm a white and gray Pegasus. I am a beginning writer and hope to get better as time goes on.
King Sombra comes back to the New Crystal Empire after a long battle. Fluttershy waits for him to welcome back her king after a long day of peace talks with the neighboring factions.
Constructive Criticism is welcome for this first story on my account!
My friend Juby Skylines helped me edit, he deserves a lot of the credit!
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4396100 Thank you very much. Expect more from this. I am planning on writing a back story for this, wanted to set a base for it first to test my skills. So stay tuned!
interesting... more likes than my stories LOL Sad Face... keep up the good work...
So far 4 Derpys out of 5
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! ,very good keep it up
I really like this... no. I LOVE this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm looking forward to read the next chapter.
Interesting.
Looking forward for what comes next.