This story is a sequel to The Apple Blooms
Apple Bloom is nearly complete with her apprenticeship. Her mentor, Wood Frame, is very proud of her work and the progress she has made over the years. But he struggles with certain feelings for his soon-to-be former apprentice, and whether or not if he should make them known to Apple Bloom.
Author's Note: While this story is a sequel to The Apple Blooms, it is still meant to stand alone. It is not necessary to read the first story, but I would still highly recommend that you do so.
Chapters (4)
I like
i like it, lets see where it goes.
As I thought about it, I realized that I was not entirely satisfied with the ending, so I took it down, as well as deleted any comments referring to it. It is nothing personal, but I know I can do better, and you people deserve it. I will be reworking it a bit, so it is not as rushed as it was.
I apologize to those who did read the last chapter while it was still up since the ending is basically already spoiled for you. I can make no promises about when the edited ending will be published, or if you will like it any better, but I will try my best. I hope you can forgive me.
This ending is way better. I felt more fulfilled after reading this version
You only get one chance at a good first impression, and that is equally true when presenting the closing of anything, like a story. Unfortunately, I blew that for a few people with this one.
However, there is nothing I can do about it now. If anything, I am now satisfied with this story and its conclusion, and I hope that you are too.
are you going to continue this universe, because i am curious abot mac and cherile relationship and others in general
this is going to be interesting.
4431565 I'm not going to say "no", but I currently don't have any plans on it. Originally, I didn't think I would ever expand this universe beyond The Apple Blooms, but a few days later I came up with the idea that resulted in this story.
So I wouldn't count out any future sequels/prequels/side-stories just yet.
Lil' Mac ^_^ that's adorable
4449545 You should read The Apple Blooms to see his introduction. He's not very involved, but he still has a cute moment talked about.
I'm actually really liking this story, a lot. Right up until this chapter anyways. Is it just me or does it seem forced? They go from a master/apprentice relationship to proposing marriage? There was no buildup. No dating, courting, not even flirting. It just seems like the cart got put before the horse... some pun intended.
Quite a nice story, albeit too short and how the proposal came quite quickly. I wish it were longer, and buildup of the relationship was more in-depth. Some "sweet moments" between the protagonists would have been a great additive.
Regardless, I did enjoy it. It has it's nice moments.
6261975 Thanks, I'm glad you liked those moments.
Yeah, I will admit that the ending is rushed even after extending it a bit. Maybe one day I'll come back to this and do some overhauling to make it seem more natural and satisfactory. Thanks for your feedback.
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You're welcome! It would be great to read any revamps of this story, so I'll keep my eyes open if you ever make any!