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This was actually good.

actually good........ :rainbowhuh:

It was pretty good, some mistakes but that's expected. GOOD JOB! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

...that is a very interesting concept...a VERY interesting concept...I had thought about Nightmare Moon being good...but never the NightmareLuna pairing...interesting


this is now my favorite shipping!

It's a strange little one-shot fic, I'll be honest, I was expecting it to be horrible from the pairing. The characterization was a bit weird, but still, overall, not bad.

I found this pretty good actually, I found the paring obviously unique and different, but pleasant. However, I find this would be quite an interesting story if it were rebuild or perhaps put together in a genuine story <-- preferably full out romance considering I can't picture too much more.

"The two shared a glance in the silence, neither smiling, yet neither frowning." That's a good line, one less virginal than many of the clop writers I've seen. This could've very easily been a quick porno with no meaning. It takes a certain amount of talent to make a measurable, new idea like this one AND make it work. You should be proud of this little gem, it certainly shined. :pinkiehappy:

That was funny!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:
it wasn't that bad but... could have been better.

What is up with all the really good clop authors thinking that they write bad stories?:applejackunsure: This was wonderful!! And implying that Nightmare Moon's motivation was out of love for Luna makes this a really interesting piece.:heart: You took a very deep and engaging idea and turned it into a beautiful love/sex scene:pinkiesad2: between two of my absolute favorite characters.:raritystarry: Please Please PLEASE keep writing like this.:fluttershysad: It doen't have to be clop but this is great and you should do more!!!:twilightsmile:

I actually rather enjoyed this. Didn't even clop, this was just a good short story.

If this is what you consider bad then I definitely want to see what good is. Mostly because this is good to me.

I thought it was nicely written. :ajsmug:

That's strange... I've been awake for over twenty hours, too, and to me it seems like a fantastic clopfic. Has to be something like minus and minus makes plus. Anyway, I'll come back when I've slept and rant a bit about how bad it really is :P.

Also, I :heart: Nightmare Moon. The nice one more than when she's really heinous, though my favorite is still somewhere between those two.

what are you guys laughing about?, i dont clop and i found it to be interesting

It's rather cute. You should feel proud of yourself, you made something so well with such an interesting concept that you made a sadist call it cute. You win.

Isn't this kind of a form of masturbation?:derpyderp1:

Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle and Nightmare Moon are my three favorite characters from the show, and this story is so cute and hot. I WOULD like to make one tiny suggestion: A sequel in which Princess Celestia either has Nightmare Moon to herself or joins in with Moon/Luna.

Not necessarily. Nightmare Moon was another being that took possesion of Luna. Technically yes, but otherwise no.

I thought it was great:twilightsmile:

My only complaint for this fic was you probably should have taken some time to establish nightmare's behavior. Without that she just comes off as OOC.:twilightblush:

Nicely done, could have been fleshed out a little more but overall a job well done none the less.

A shame no one else has taken the initiative to put more Luna x Nightmare Moon out there. It's an interesting concept.

One of the best Luna clop fics I've read yet...

she was aired for like 5 minutes ...of course she will be ooc or oc.

A for effort.
C for quality.
A+ for the ship

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