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#2 · 259w, 4d ago · 2 · ·

Bad?!?!THIS IS ART!

#4 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

This was actually good.

#5 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

actually good........ :rainbowhuh:

#6 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

It was pretty good, some mistakes but that's expected. GOOD JOB! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

#8 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

...that is a very interesting concept...a VERY interesting concept...I had thought about Nightmare Moon being good...but never the NightmareLuna pairing...interesting

UFB
#9 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

this is now my favorite shipping!

#10 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

It's a strange little one-shot fic,  I'll be honest, I was expecting it to be horrible from the pairing. The characterization was a bit weird, but still, overall, not bad.

#11 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

I found this pretty good actually, I found the paring obviously unique and different, but pleasant. However, I find this would be quite an interesting story if it were rebuild or perhaps put together in a genuine story <-- preferably full out romance considering I can't picture too much more.

#13 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

"The two shared a glance in the silence, neither smiling, yet neither frowning." That's a good line, one less virginal than many of the clop writers I've seen. This could've very easily been a quick porno with no meaning. It takes a certain amount of talent to make a measurable, new idea like this one AND make it work. You should be proud of this little gem, it certainly shined. :pinkiehappy:

#14 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

That was funny!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

it wasn't that bad but... could have been better.

#15 · 259w, 4d ago · · ·

What is up with all the really good clop authors thinking that they write bad stories?:applejackunsure:  This was wonderful!!  And implying that Nightmare Moon's motivation was out of love for Luna makes this a really interesting piece.:heart:  You took a very deep and engaging idea and turned it into a beautiful love/sex scene:pinkiesad2: between two of my absolute favorite characters.:raritystarry:  Please Please PLEASE keep writing like this.:fluttershysad:  It doen't have to be clop but this is great and you should do more!!!:twilightsmile:

#16 · 259w, 3d ago · · ·

I actually rather enjoyed this. Didn't even clop, this was just a good short story.

#17 · 259w, 3d ago · · ·

If this is what you consider bad then I definitely want to see what good is.  Mostly because this is good to me.

#18 · 259w, 2d ago · · ·

I thought it was nicely written. :ajsmug:

#19 · 259w, 1d ago · · ·

That's strange... I've been awake for over twenty hours, too, and to me it seems like a fantastic clopfic. Has to be something like minus and minus makes plus. Anyway, I'll come back when I've slept and rant a bit about how bad it really is :P.

Also, I :heart: Nightmare Moon. The nice one more than when she's really heinous, though my favorite is still somewhere between those two.

#20 · 258w, 3d ago · · ·

if you fuck your other self, does that mean you clopping?

#21 · 257w, 6d ago · · ·

what are you guys laughing about?, i dont clop and i found it to be interesting

:twilightsmile:

#22 · 257w, 6d ago · · ·

It's rather cute. You should feel proud of yourself, you made something so well with such an interesting concept that you made a sadist call it cute. You win.

#23 · 257w, 5d ago · · ·

Isn't this kind of a form of masturbation?:derpyderp1:

#24 · 256w, 6h ago · · ·

Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle and Nightmare Moon are my three favorite characters from the show, and this story is so cute and hot.  I WOULD like to make one tiny suggestion: A sequel in which Princess Celestia either has Nightmare Moon to herself or joins in with Moon/Luna.

#25 · 252w, 5d ago · · ·

>>463494

Not necessarily. Nightmare Moon was another being that took possesion of Luna. Technically yes, but otherwise no.

#26 · 246w, 1d ago · · ·

I thought it was great:twilightsmile:

#27 · 236w, 5d ago · · ·

My only complaint for this fic was you probably should have taken some time to establish nightmare's behavior.  Without that she just comes off as OOC.:twilightblush:

#28 · 218w, 3d ago · 1 · ·

Nicely done, could have been fleshed out a little more but overall a job well done none the less.  

A shame no one else has taken the initiative to put more Luna x Nightmare Moon out there.  It's an interesting concept.  

#29 · 166w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

One of the best Luna clop fics I've read yet...

#30 · 120w, 4d ago · · ·

>>1257269

she was aired for like 5 minutes ...of course she will be ooc or oc.

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