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I write pony fanfiction, mostly sappy romance stuff.


Octavia had just moved to Ponyville. She didn't leave behind too much back in Canterlot. No friends. No family. The only thing that held value to her was her cello. But on her first night in Ponyville, one fateful meeting will change her life, hopefully for the better.

A rare OctaDerp story. Please, enjoy. Awesome cover art by Wadusher0.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 130 )

Never seen OctaDerp before.
Looks fascinating.

4414438 Thanks! I've never seen it before either. Surprising, considering the level of d'aw the two can reach when they combine their power. :rainbowkiss:

That's new.

Carry on...

4414677 Yes... uh... ma'am! :twilightoops:

Because Applecord and Tom X Anon is not cracked up enough.
Alas, carry on, good sir. :moustache:
You had my interest. :trixieshiftright:
Now you have my full pending curiosity. :rainbowhuh:

4414724 Wow. That's a lot of responsibility for one pony to handle :rainbowderp:

You better write this good, or else you'd be sleeping with the seaponies.


4414769 lol oh gawd, anything but the seaponies! :rainbowlaugh:

Alright, real talk for a sec here.

Quite bold of you to set up another story while still in the process of writing an already ongoing one. To that I say, best of luck. :twilightsmile:

In a more serious note, it really does look promising. I favor myself some OctaScratch myself, but seeing these two even together in a story is very intruiging. So as I have said, I guess I'll just have to wait and see. :yay:


Comment posted by Eyvind deleted May 19th, 2014

4414813 Thank you for the well wishes :pinkiehappy:

I actually started this fic because I felt I was in a slump with the other one and wouldn't be able to do it justice if I tried writing it while like that :twilightblush: Now I feel like I have some breathing room where I can work on one or the other, which is an amazing feeling :yay:

I have no idea what brought these two together in my mind :twilightoops: I just realized that I'd never seen it before, so it might be interesting to try it out. I pray I don't disappoint :scootangel:

I wish I had gotten a fic featured! :rainbowlaugh: The feature was actually a PMV I made that they chose for the simple pmv nightly round up. Still, I nearly shat myself when I found out haha.

I stand corrected then... :trixieshiftleft:
Well anyways, I don't want to drag you for too long, I'm sure you got other things to do.
Alrighty then, I better take a breather, next thing you know, there would be some Cranky Doodle x Sombra running around. :rainbowlaugh:

Huh...not a bad idea...

Usually I read OctaScratch but lovin' it so far

4415023 I throw my gratitude at you relentlessly! :heart:

Oh look gratitude! Hey look, some more! Uhh... Its not stopping..?

A short but quite happy start to what I believe will be an amazing story!
I do hope that this continues for a while, but that's my own greedy wants. Lol

Keep up the amazing work! Can't wait for more!

Points for novelty, which itself is worth reading.

4419522 Thanks for the inspiring words :twilightsmile: I hope it continues for a while as well.

4419601 I'll take any points I can get :rainbowlaugh:

I usually read OctyScratch, but this is very good. I can't wait for future chapters!

4422484 Thank you! :scootangel: Chapter 2 coming right up!

cute, fun, me like, need moar.

4425271 Your wish is my command :raritywink:

(Looking at the cover picture) something's not quite right here.... :trixieshiftleft:

:pinkiegasp: i know!

You stole her Derp! :derpytongue2:

4425334 Derpy misplaces her derp sometimes :rainbowlaugh: not to worry, she always finds it again :derpytongue2:

... The ad below the story says free shipping...
I'll take that as a sign! I will read this story!

4425417 And I enjoyed it a lot! You get a like and favorite from my good sir/madam.

Sweet Celestia, chapter 2 is already here. Can`t wait to see what they get into.

derptavia..... huh.
this is.... well pardon the phrasing here,fucking delightful to read. i mean really this is touching and sweet.
also to people with rather severe anxiety issues really nice to read cause we can relate to octy pretty well.
im going to favorite this in the hopes it doesn't die on the vine like so many other touching tales ive read here.

4425441 Thank you for the support! :pinkiehappy: Every happy customer is another reason to keep writing. :heart:

4426161 Glad you're enjoying it so much! :twilightsmile: I borrowed a bit of my own experiences with social anxiety to write for Tavi. Much feels :pinkiesad2:

4427084 Stereotypical kung fu master for the win! :moustache:

Ooh, it got into the popular section! Congrats! :heart::pinkiehappy:

Not long 'till featured. :coolphoto:

Seems cute. I'll be tracking.

4427522 It was in the feature box early this morning but it only stayed there for ten minutes :raritycry:

The feels I got when I saw it up there, tho :raritystarry::rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::heart::pinkiecrazy::yay::trollestia::scootangel:

4427626 Thanks! :yay:

I know, right? Best feeling ever. :rainbowkiss:
I hope it gets up there for longer. It deserves to be there. :rainbowkiss::heart:

Very interesting and cute story. Hope to see more of it:pinkiesmile:

4435735 Thank you :twilightsheepish: Working on chapter three as we speak.


I can't hear you!





while ditzy lay on her back,


"Hi, I'm pinkie Pie!


4442718 That was a fun part to write :rainbowlaugh:

4443289 Oops, thank you! :twilightblush: I'll fix those asap.

Good so far... I just hope you don't move this story too fast... I don't want it to end as soon as it feels like its starting lol
Keep up the amazing work, I hope for more soon!

Damn it Octavia! YOU SHOULD'VE SAID SOMETHING!!!!:flutterrage:

Cute chapter, loved their chemistry. It's really sweet. Hope to see the next chapter soon.

4444657 Don't worry, I intend to develop their friendship further before getting to the romance. :moustache:

4444665 Thank you :scootangel: Ditzy's bubbliness against Octavia's shyness is fun to write and to read :pinkiehappy:


Yeah. I love these particular characterizations in both characters. A lovely bubbly Ditzy, who is NOT! dumb or stupid in any fashion, she just tends to be forgetful, and clumsy because of her eyes. A reserved, shy, and socially awkward/inexperienced Octavia who reacts to things in THE. MOST. DAAWW! WAY!!! With these two together in one fic and being shipped as well, THE ADORABLENESS HAS BEEN DOUBLED AND DOUBLED AGAIN!!


yup,still loving this. you dear author are awesome and keep up the excellent work.

4444949 yep! :rainbowkiss:

4445984 :fluttercry:

4448581 Glad you're happy :pinkiehappy:

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