Act 4 chapter 6
While the screaming and ranting of the unicorn could be heard by all of the other cellmates, some of them were a lot more colorful than there was originally thought of them. All of Equestria’s most insane cases were locked up right inside of that very facility. Ponies with mutations or powers better left unspoken by any sane mind. Either way, they all were there because they had one little thing in common with each other. They were all classified as criminally insane or just completely insane.
Few of the ponies actually gave a hearing to the words that Rarity screamed. Most of them were more interested in the banging of her hooves against stone as they punched the walls for the last time, only to be followed by a near sobbing. Some of them looked to one another with a smirk, as if they knew exactly what they could and perhaps would be doing to the poor mare. If luck was standing on their side.
Though the mind of the ivory coated unicorn had finally snapped, it had finally broken among the walls of her cell. The beast would be replacing her. The Rarity that even the inmates once knew was gone. Only to be replaced with the most maddening form that the unicorn could have ever taken. Every single soul could have spoken of luck that she didn't had her magic to her. Otherwise there was no keeping control of her. Then again, she would have gotten out a long time ago.
Yet hidden among the darkness of one of the many unlit hallways could the clanking noise of an artificial leg be heard. Its echo pure as sunlight, thumping through it. It was a warning for all those in the asylum that the ruler and master of the place was somewhere near them. A pony who could be deemed just as insane as those who have been locked inside of it.
The sounds came all of the sudden to a silent hold The head slowly turned itself towards the noises made by Rarity herself. In a flash of lightning was the body of the doctor revealed for only a split second though the head remained in the shadows. What was seen though, was the white lab coat that was worn over the body as well as the amethyst leg. Only one pony in the land had such a prosthetic item attached to the body and the criminals shook their head as they returned deeper into their cells.
Upon the face of the boss grew a smirk that slowly turned itself into a deep laughter as the trotting continued. The body disappeared further and further into the madness until the words echoed back. “I like to see you try, doctor,” was spoken in a terrible teasing tone. One that would have made any inmate just wanted to choke the mare right where she stood.
“I’d like to see you, try.”
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just looking at this image makes me think of living crystal creatures aggressively defending the underbelly of canterlot....
o my ahh! I wonder/hope if there gonna be a sequel?
5292540 You'll be surprised what roams the mines of Canterlot. Just what do you think happens to be a reason why they are abandoned?
5292946 Time will tell, maybe there's going to be, maybe not. I don't have plans for it as of speaking though.
5293265 okay now I have to read this
5293421 Do it when you have the time, and leave any feedback that you like.
5299831 I think you can figure out whether or not the pony died. That, or just belief what is most settling to you.
As for your other question, I would say that you have to use your imagination (given the severe lack of technology within the story), but I'm going to just say it. It's a book, a tale, a horror story told by teenaged mares and stallions to scare the living daylight out of one another.
I just realized this fic is an epic telling of classical 5 Act tragedy. Meaning: Rarity dies in the next act and we (the readers) will have learned not to mess with unknown spells.
5310799 Heh, now that you say it, you do have a sharp point there actually. Might need to start working on Act 5 quickly then. (as in, Valve-time)
5311544 I enjoyed the story.
I liked it while it lasted though I'm a bit disappointed with the short ending.
5374226 We can do something about that actually.
>>Rarity Belle So you have future plans for this then? And lastly "we" are you referring to a editor?
5378513 Plans are always constantly in the make and with the open ending I happened to give for it, anything is possible actually. Who knows. Though I'm afraid that 'we' in this case just happens to refer to both me and my insane mind.
Ok. And for the record I don't think having a passin for riddlrs declares you as insane.
5378631 Speaking in riddles doesn't make me insane, everything else I do however, kinda does.
So your saying you do crazy stuff on a regalur basis?
5378890 Just about, yes.
5380879 I see nothing wrong with it. I do crazy stuff hourly, if not by the minute.