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When everypony else has left one of Pinkie Pie's parties, Fluttershy makes a personal confession to the pink mare but flees before seeing her reaction. Pinkie then leaves for a week to spend time with her family on their farm outside of Ponyville. As the return of Pinkie Pie draws closer, Fluttershy becomes anxious and starts to doubt whether she made the right choice in letting out her secret.

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PinkieShy is best pairing.
You have done well!

What library charges? Isn't the point of a library to borrow books for free, barring late fees?

Nice story otherwise.

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My local library used to charge a small fee for books if you didn't have a membership card with them. Thanks for pointing that out, I realise that isn't the case with most libraries. And thanks for reading it too!

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Yeah all the libraries I've interacted with just make you a quick card after they get all your relevant info so that if you steal a book they can send the attack librarians after you. :twilightangry2:

This story was so adorable. PinkieShy is among my favorite pairs, and I'm glad I found this story. :yay::heart::pinkiehappy:

Simply Beautiful! Teary eyed grins!

that ending line makes up for no friend reactions. such powerful emotions in one line

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Thank you. I was originally going to include friend reactions, but in the end, I was unable to have both that and the ending I wanted without abruptly changing the scene again. Since I'd used three already, I decided not to break up the flow (which, in my opinion, was already fairly poor) any more than I already had. Which is a shame, because I would have enjoyed writing them.

The letter was the most thoughtful letter I have ever heard of. The amount of time that it took and the amount of concentration could easily be seen in such a beautiful letter. :pinkiehappy: oh and I also loved the story, one of my favorite pairs

I wish there were more Flutter/Pie stories, cause this is adorable.
:yay::heart::pinkiehappy:

I love this... so much! PinkieShy is my favorite pairing ever, but that's not the only reason I like this story. It's just absolutely beautiful, well-written, and adorable! I love the flow of the whole thing.

i've actually seen this story before on this site for a while now
i finally took the time to read it, and i have one thing to say:
why didn't i read it sooner?!?!?!:twilightangry2:
i really liked this story, Pinkieshy is my OTP
good work, my friend, good work!
:yay::heart::pinkiehappy:

Awww, this one's especially sweet. :heart:
I seldom comment due to my poor English. It took me over an hour to read this, (and another 40 minutes to type this comment), yet it was totally worthwhile. Really. Well-Written.
At first I thought this one's just an average story, for Pinkie couldn't possibly be so rude and forced Fluttershy to confess -- she must know how delicate Fluttershy's heart is. It just seemed strange in my first opinion.
But as I continue my reading, I found that Fluttershy wasn't a usual friend to her as well. She had to fight for her own love. Then it was all clear and not strange at all.
In real life I'm a "Fluttershy type" of person, so I know this kind of feeling quite well -- that you want to do something, and have planed for it well, but in a very important moment, you screw it up. Then you would doubt yourself, "How can I be this weak and stupid?" This feeling of failure would just make you want to cry.
So, this story really touched my heart deeply while I was reading. I had to halt myself to catch a breath when I saw Pinkie's letter to Fluttershy. Just so many feelings, ahh…
It's a pity that you, dear auther, haven't been back on this site since 2013. But one day if you are back, I'd like to thank you, thank you for writing this. :pinkiesad2::heart::fluttershyouch:

"Oh, come ON Fluttershy! There must be some part of you which wants to be a little daring! You must be so boooored of telling me things I already know. Pick dare, for once! I've got a really really really good one for you," Pinkie said as she rolled dramatically onto her back. "Pleeeeease?"

At least Pinky's not like some of my friends when I play this game they straight up tell me that I have to pick it down someone in the spirit of the game I have anxiety screw you

Oh my god/Celestia, this story is so wonderful! It has been one of my ships I used to ship, and seeing a story so well written about them truly makes me still like this ship, I really like it and I love how the story went! It was a little confusing as to why Pinkie had went to Sweet Apple Acres when we know where her real family is, but, nonetheless, great story! 10/10
:pinkiehappy::heart::fluttershyouch:

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