"When did you make your decision?"
Sunset Shimmer would have jumped out of her clothes, had she been wearing any. Instead, she gave out a frightened squeal and attempted to run off, but in her haste forgot she was now a quadruped and fell flat on her face. Celestia slowly cantered over to her former student and extended a hoof to help Sunset to her own.
Before taking it, Sunset eyed the alicorn princess suspiciously. If she held any genuine concern for her, she hid it quite well under a mask of indifference practiced over millennia. Reluctantly, the unicorn used said hoof as support. As her bearings returned to her, she answered in a matter-of-fact tone, "I knew I would need to come home right after Twilight Sparkle left; however, I had unfinished business to attend to in the human world." Subconciously, she realized that she was in Celestia's own bedchambers. The princess must have been keeping a closer eye on the mirror since Sunset's last visit. It was an expansive, yet cozy room with a large, four-poster bed, several tall bookshelves, and a fireplace, the sole source of heat for the room. It was efficient in both that purpose and in giving the room a lived-in feeling that put visitors to ease.
Her hoof still clutching the unicorn's, Celestia pulled Sunset into a tight hug. "My little pony, I am so glad that after all this time and everything that has happened, you still feel you can call this your home," She cried, tears of joy running down the sides of her muzzle and falling to the floor below.
To say Sunset felt awkward in the situation she found herself in would be an understatement. She had expected punishment. She had expected banishment to the moon, or to another land...and a dungeon in that land. Not in her wildest dreams had she expected to be welcomed back by Celestia with open hooves, yet here she was, and she felt her own hooves coming up to embrace her once-teacher as well. "I know now you never gave me a real reason to think otherwise," She responded. When she felt herself having to bite back her own tears, she pushed away. "Now enough of this touchy-feely horse apples!"
Celestia raised an amused eyebrow. "Now, Princess Twilight explained that she left you with her friends to learn the importance of friendship," Celestia mentioned with a twinkle in her eye. "Do you need further lessons after all this time?"
She was joking, of course, but Sunset Shimmer answered seriously. "Actually," She started, hanging her head humbly. Her next few words were nigh inaudible as she knelt to the ruler of Equestria. "I have come to beg for your forgiveness and to request tutelage under Sparkle, herself."
Celestia could tell that this level of humility was both excruciating for the unicorn and practiced, for hours, in front of a mirror. When Sunset looked up to her with a pout and big, doe eyes, she couldn't help but crack a smile and let loose a small giggle.
Sunset's brow furrowed and she stood, stomping a hoof with righteous indignation. "Are you laughing at me?" She asked incredulously. "I poured my heart and soul out to you and apologized, and you're laughing at me?! Why you-"
"Sunset Shimmer!" The authority in Celestia's voice quieted hers quite effectively; however, her next words were spoken in the same, soft tone she'd been using before. "I only did so because it is laughable to believe you have not been forgiven already." Sunset seemed speechless, so Celestia continued. "I will gladly send you by chariot to Princess Twilight's castle in Ponyville in the morning. Come with me so we can get you washed up. You're filthy." Celestia chuckled lightly and turned to walk out of her bed chambers, but something she said shook Sunset from her stupor.
"Hold on, did I just hear you say castle? In Ponyville!?" She asked, unable to believe her own ears. From what she remembered of Ponyville from maps, it was a small village, no more than twenty-five homes in its entirety. Surely there couldn't be a castle there of all places.
Celestia looked back at her student with a sly wink. "You will see, in time," she responded cryptically, only to turn and walk away, once more leading Sunset to the bath.
Meanwhile, back at the ranch, Twilight Sparkle tossed and turned in her new bed, groaning as she attempted to find a position comfortable enough to sleep in. Of course, there was no ranch, as that would be preferred. She missed her old house. The Golden Oaks Library had a homey feel to it, and it smelled of old books and maple. It was where she'd had her first adventure, her first party. It was where she'd taught the Cutie Mark Crusaders valuable skills. It was home. After Tirek decimated the tree, she had no choice but to sleep in her castle, where everything was made of cold, unforgiving stone. Well, she did have two choices. Pinkie Pie had offered to let her stay in Sugar Cube Corner, but there were no extra rooms. Twilight had actually tried one, sleepless night. Her suspicions that Pinkie Pie was never quiet were confirmed. The pink pony went on and on all night long, the subjects of her rambling ever changing, yet the central focus seemed to be yams.
Likewise, Rainbow Dash had offered solace in her cloud house, and while there were plenty of extra rooms, a cold, damp cloud bed sounded just as unappealing to her as the one she currently laid upon. When she explained such to Rainbow, the pegasus merely claimed that Twilight wasn't cool enough for her cloud house anyway. Giving up, Twilight rose out of bed, mane askew from all her tossing and turning. As if he had read her mind, Spike came bursting through the door. He looked sick. For a fleeting second, Twilight as actually worried for her dragon companion before she recognized that expression. He had a delivery. The dragon ran up to her, clutched his stomach in what seemed to be pain, and belched loudly. As his smoky breath wafted from his mouth, it sparkled and a scroll materialized from it.
Twilight caught it in her magic as Spike turned toward the door. With a sigh of relief, he said, "Letter from C'lestia. G'night!" The door slammed behind him. Twilight rolled her eyes, unsure if the dragon was even awake enough to get to his room before collapsing in the hall. Dismissing the thought, Twilight looked down at the letter he'd left. Celestia never sent overnight letters. Whatever information contained within had to be of the utmost importance, so she did what she did with all Celestia's letters. She tore the seal open and read it immediately.
As her eyes scanned the page, they slowly grew to the size of saucers until they landed on those dreaded words, "Sunset Shimmer will be staying with you, in Ponyville."
The shriek those words caused would echo off the Equestria hillside for generations to come.
"WHAAATTT!!!"
Great start. I can't wait to read more.
4377689 Thanks. There aren't enough Sunlight fics.
Good start. Interested to see where this is going.
Isn't thirty moons the equivalent of three years? Thirty moons refers to moon cycles, so that is roughly three years.
4377741 Yes, but who's to say that time moves the same on both sides of the mirror? This will be addressed later on.
4377740 Thank you. That means a lot to me. Your Sunset Shimmer fic is by far my favorite.
4377790 ohmigod... I hadn't thought of that. Narnia.
This is relevant.
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Bass, this shit's amazing. Please, continue.
Well this is a very good start, i hope you don't mind if this is submitted too the SunLight group known as, Step into the SunLight (Sunset Shimmer x Twilight Sparkle) (i know the name is a bit long), also you might be interested in our SunLight Art gallery we have there, either way this looks like it will be a great story, good work.
P.S. I love how you did the title, it goes well with how Princess Celestia treated Sunset after her return.
Well, I'm glad someone understands that Twi living in a castle wouldn't be something all too great for her.
Not completely sure why you have to make this take place after the end of Season 4, but if that's what you want to do I'm not stopping you.
Good story, so far.
4377924 Exactly! And when you come back, you regress in age to the normal amount you would have aged in that time. The only exception to this being the three days the portal is open.
4377974 Thanks, man. Trust me, I will.
4377988 Honestly, I'm a member, and I've forgotten to add it to any groups.
4378009 Yeah!
4378002 Well, it's a new frontier. It's open to interpretation for an entire year. Who wouldn't want to jump on that?
4378028 Sunlight's my second favorite ship, and it doesn't get enough love. I want to give it the love it deserves.
4378037 The Silent Name Ship List:
1. PinkieScratch (Duh)
2. TwiDash
3. FlashLight (<---- Swag)
4378009 Well ok then , i will leave it too you , i still hope you enjoy the art gallery though.
4378009 okay, now I have to read this.
4378045
1. Tie Twidash/Twixie
2. SunLight
3. Haven't given it much thought...maybe ScootaBelle?
4378048 I enjoyed the whole thing just now.
4378078 I have a planned too.
4378090 Mmmmm. CMC. I mean...I'm not a creep!
Why did this story have to post while I was at work?
4378100 No judgment here.
4378105 GBecause I finished it at work? *shrugs* Sorry.
4378109 It's quite alright.
4378090 glad you enjoyed it, i also find your theory too be very interesting.
I really that in the next movie sunset will come home and continue her studies and eventually become a princess
4378029 *raises hand*
4378045
Mine is as follows:
1. TwiDash
2. OctaScratch
3. RariJack
As far as ships which conflict with those, there are actually a few which I can tolerate or even enjoy when written well, namely PinkieDash and AppleDash. And even Twixie. But not FlutterDash. NEVER Flutterdash.
4378252
And SunLight, right?
4378232 Sadly, I don't see that happening in canon, no matter how much we want it to.
4378209 Shhhh. Don't spoil it for others.
4378119 Damn. Why can't you say "fine" like everyone else so I can make bad jokes at you?
I haven't even heard of this ship. Hate me.
Well, I have to read it now. I'll give the ship a chance... as long as there's no FlutterDash.
4378508 I'm not a fan of FlutterDash, so don't worry about that. The only one I typically ship with Rainbow Dash in my non-Twidash stories is Spitfire.
4378513 But then there's always that odd fic that looks like a regular ship, then BAM half way through it's polyamoury...
I love when that happens.
Anyway, at least it's not SoarinDash.
4378543 I don't really care for Soarin. He was sort of a jerk to her more than the others at the Gala, and I've gotten that vibe from him ever since.
4378560 ...still better than
TrashCrashFlushFlashSentretSentry4378572 Lol. You mean, Emotionless Plot-device? Agreed. I was surprised when they actually gave him a line in the finale.
4378495 Ok
4378586 We can talk more about it in PM's though, if you don't mind light spoilers, yourself?
4378580
1. None of the Mane 6 were supposed to be in any straight canon relationship, according to Faust herself.
2. He's a waifu stealer. She belongs to RD and Trixie...
And maybe Sombra...
Which reminds me, I need to write my shipping list in a blog.
4378599 She really said that? EG would have been literally no different if she'd just gone to the dance with her friends. Anyone could have called Sunset out on trashing the dance hall. Other than that, he played absolutely no important role other than eliciting some cute Twilight blushes.
I wish all 38 of the people who faved this had liked it too.
4378495
Megan said that the title of princess is earned
I beleive Celestia will give her a second chance
4378626 Subject change: how about that Dislestia canon, eh? Suck it, Twilestias!
4378598 maybe latter, in truth i was about to get off, i'll PM you latter OK? (i have Dark souls 2 all set up to play)
and no i don't mind light spoilers, as long as they don't reveal too much.
4378665 Maybe.
4378682 I was more upset by the breaking of the Princest ship. Lol.
4378717 Lol. K. TTFN.
4378766 I guess that's something we disagree on. I didn't like princest.
Can I get a bizaam over here?!
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4378682
I bet when discord did little wink. All the shippers got in their trucks
4378819 Woah! Who did that animation?
4378825 I have a friend who's fave ship is Dislestia, and she's flipping out.
Wow! It got to 22 likes before it got a dislike. That's pretty damn good! I think that's a new personal record.
4378855 You mean besides me?
Have another:
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Maybe Ava did the animation. Maybe she didn't. Maybe it's from the show. Maybe it isn't.
Who knows, who cares? We're just a bunch of stupid mares.