Mother's Day with Dinky and Derpy.
(I had this made last year and I forgot about it until now)
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Finally read it.
I'll send you the hospital bill for that "daaaw attack" you gave me...and that "feels stroke."
Have a nice day.
So adorable! Happy morthers day to all.
Well, it ain't easy being a parent and it ain't all hugs and muffins. Thanks for reminding us of this.
Gotta love it :)
I was quite surprised on how much of a contrast the majority of this story is regarding with Derpy's usually cheerful personality. Still, it offered a nice build-up for the heartwarming resolve in the end. Nicely done!
It was a beautifully written story, Rated Ponystar. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE stories like this.
Was this story supposed to have the anthro tag?
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Honestly it felt like it was just a generic mother's day story with pony names stuck in instead. Admittedly Derpy has little canonical personality (though she does have some) but I didn't really get much of a Derpy feel out of the story.
s/concur/conquer/
Nice story, it even gives Derpy a chance to add a dimension to her character.
conquer it, I think you meant. There is one more spelling error in there somewhere too but I forget what now.
But beyond that it's a perfect little slice of life, with a more realistic version version of Derpy we don't see often.
Aww... that's sweet.
Urrgh.... agh..... right in the feels....ack!
Ok.... I'm weak...but......once again....Rated, u hurt my feels to.....much
Wowzers! That was super-rific!
Now! On to the dimension where you wrote the sequel!
Damn it! Because of you and your awesome story, I had to send my little bro to the hospital for the Cuteness Overload!
So cute, so heartwarming, so tender...
Live read!
I never get tired of the adorableness of Derpy and Dinky.
Eeyup
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Just plain adorable.