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Never2muchpinkie


Just your average brony who enjoys writing stories.


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Set a few years into the future, this story focuses on the adventures of the older Cake Twins. Much like Friendship is Magic itself this story has no true conclusion, and is always ongoing so long as I have the ideas for it.

Six year old Pound and Pumpkin have grown up a little from the babies they used to be, but there is still much to learn about maturity, working together, and friendship. Working together they protect and love each other, and some days they can't stand each other and get into horrible fights. At the end of the day they always come back together, hating being away from their other half.

Pound is very impulsive, acting without thinking, with an ego to match Trixie's, even when he can't back it up. He has no hesitation at attacking others for picking on his sister, insisting that's a privilege only he can enjoy. The unofficial leader, he's usually the one to think of idea's, and also the first to sulk or get depressed when things don't go his way.

Pumpkin is the more rational one, the voice of reason. However, she's still apt to go along with Pound's ideas simply because its better than being alone, and she doesn't want him to get hurt if she's not around.

Together they can overcome anything that comes their way.

Chapters (73)
Comments ( 861 )

Twins are all "FUN isn't fun, BORING is fun!"
Pinkies all :pinkiegasp:
I'm all :rainbowhuh::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh: D'AWWWW HNNNNGGG

I hope this hits the feature box so hard!

:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy: I'm glad I read the Derpy story first and then this one, just what I needed to cheer myself up. I bet up there an angel is pouting they didn't get a chance to earn their wings by showing Pinkie how booting life would be for everyone without her.

Thanks for writing this.
I am glad that I put this in the group file.
It is a sweet story.

4417196 I'm honored. :yay: I enjoyed your popular story We Regret To Inform You so it almost feels like I have a celebrity endorsement. :heart::heart::heart::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

Though I'm sure you don't consider yourself that high.

4418704 That high of a position. Or that high on yourself.

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Pound and Pumpkin are my favourite characters in the show :rainbowkiss:

I'D SHIP THAT (oh wait, i have. Numerous times. And am about to do it again. Heh.)

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Hey there. This went from a standalone story to a series of sort bits involving the twins, so I hope you enjoy the other adventures of Pound and Pumpkin. :pinkiesmile:

Wait, why is the newest chapter in the Chapter 1 spot?

4434388 I switched the chapter order up. When I put out a new chapter I want to know what people think and I figure most people will start with the chapter up top. And there isn't really any continuity between the stories so it doesn't matter what order they're in.

That being said, how did you enjoy the two new chapters?

I read these all up to the Daring Do one at the same time I commented on Big Sis Scootaloo.
And I must say, the Daring one is my favorite one so far!
It would be a really cool adventure story if it was longer, just not as a play though.

I'd like to see them get their cutie marks.

Too... Much... D'awwwws!!!!!

4774128 If you want some more Daww I have already written out the story of Pinkie's first day in Ponyville and how she came to live with them.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/189993/how-a-pie-became-a-cake

soooo cuuute :3:3:3

this is giving me diabetus

I missed the update on this one somehow...

4821662 AAANDDDD? What did you think? :rainbowhuh:

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This is the first time I found something I felt I needed to pick at in one of your stories.

The only part of the story that made me flinch was at the end when Mrs. Cake said, "Pinkie Pie, that was only a nightmare!" It makes me feel like she knew what Pinkie was talking about, right away. Like she knew what Pinkie drempt.

With that in mind, there are a few things that can imply.

One) She actually did tell Pinkie those things and is now a troll... :trollestia: (Most funny)

Two) She now knows how to dream walk - like Luna - and saw Pinkie's dream. (Least likely)

Three) She is very insightful. (Most likely)

Four) I'm being picky right now... (probably this one)

I've seen this happen in a few other stories, and it bothers me the most out of the few things that do bother me.

But aside from that, it was a really good story! Keep up the great work! :pinkiehappy:

4838561 I might wager on number 4. :derpytongue2:

If Pinkie had brought that up with MISTER Cake than I could understand your complaint. Think about this for a second. If someone tells you that in the middle of the night you came into their room, told them they sucked and wanted them out of your life for good, and you KNOW you never did any such thing, than what other explanation would YOU come up with besides it being a nightmare? I don't believe you have to be extremely insightful to know that much.

Unless it was really a changeling, but you already know that this isn't that kind of story. :rainbowwild:

:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::raritystarry:
I love this! I'm glad I could help you with this chapter.

4881609 I like the bit with the candle the best. It's such a kid thing to do. "We can't light a real fire, so here' a drawing of one." It keeps making me laugh. I'm glad you gave me this idea. :pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

This one really hit me hard...

My parents, (when they were together) would fight a lot. I think this story made me feel such strong emotions because I know how it feels to be in Pound and Pumpkin's place, and it is not fun at all.

Keep them comming!

~ That guy who cries a lot.

4888870 Glad I could hit you right in the feels! :heart::twilightsmile:

Tell me, did you laugh at the candle bit? I just find that so amusing and adorable. And I wrote it! It still makes me laugh. "Yeah, we can't light a real candle, so here's a drawing of one instead."

Ah, bless them. They tried so hard.

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Yeah, it did make me laugh!

Wow, I don't like tragedies but that was awesome :pinkiegasp: :fluttercry:
10/10 would read again

4894278 Yes, your princess of the night is capable of telling Death to go screw himself. Like I said in my blog this is a bit different from the stuff I usually write. The coma-scape dream, and the bed with the "comfy light" as a symbolism for death is a nice change of pace.

I also love the ending. They get to share their dreams and play together all night.

Really, I think this is my favorite chapter of this series. It's so intense. The almost death, Pound's love for his sister so strong even death can't stop him from protecting her. I haven't felt so enthralled about making a story in a long time. I'm really happy!

Glad I got to entertain you and make you cry. But of course if you know my writing you also knew I wasn't REALLY going to kill him off, right? :scootangel::heart::heart:

4890786 Did you read the new chapter yet? Weren't you all excited to see how awesome Luna is???:pinkiehappy:

Maybe if you wanted to do another tragedy chapter, you could do something to pumpkin via fluttershy's assertive and/or vampony side?

4898236 Funny that idea should come from YOU......FLUTTER_BAT!!!!!:twilightangry2: Thou shalt not harm Pumpkin Cake, thy vile fiend of the night.

I'm not planning on another tragedy chapter. The inspiration just hit. I'm planning to go back to more slice-of-life type stories. The next one is gonna be a bit of a follow-up to this one, and the twins get to go to pre-school for a day. Yes, I said "A" day. You know those two are gonna raise some hell wherever they go.

I was originally planning on making these self-contained stories so they could be read in any order, but I've started referencing previous chapters so I'm just gonna let that pass

4898783 but pumpkin... She's so ripe, and juicy *drools*

4774220 I read that it is SOOO cute :derpytongue2::heart:

Dan

Chapter idea. Button Mash and Sweetie teaches them Minecraft Raspberry Pi edition.

Teaching kids coding and tty commands can never be started too soon.

May I suggest a story about Pound and Pumpkin getting a pet? Looking after another living creature is always a challenge, and I thought it would be a good lesson for them to learn about, um, the magic of sibling hood?:twilightsheepish:

Maybe they start off with a dog or something, but find it too hard to look after, so in the end they end up getting something more at their level, like a fishy each!:yay:

Comment posted by Starla Sparkle deleted Aug 11th, 2015

why is this rated teen? it looks like something that should be rated everyone.:rainbowhuh:

5011126 Well, if you look at the title of chapter 9 I think that will give you a clue. That was an intense chapter with a near fatal accident.

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