This story is a sequel to Twilight Destiny
Set after 'Twilight's Kingdom' Two Parts, Twilight Sparkle met Shadow Dragon and learned of him and his past, but soon encountered his former comrades and enemies to face. Why does she and him felt their hearts connected and in warmth? Will Shadow Dragon remained with his new life or return to endless nightmare of his past?
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To be honest, I don't see Twilight and Shadow Dragon together AT ALL. But it's your story.
4372271 I agree with him. Twilight is better off with Ben Mare. Still, great story!
Err, no. Simply no.
ok, I'm no expert but is Shadow Dragon a character from some where else or is he made up here because I can't help but feel like this is a crossover for some reason.
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It's not a crossover. He's the character inspired and based on Kenshin Himura, Anakin Skywalker, Chase Young and Ichigo (Bleach).
why is chapter 8 before 7?
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Yeah, sorry about that. I got the mixed up. But it's fixed.
5398699 oh, that is why his so familiar.
okay.
is this story set in the Past Sins universe? because that's usually when Nyx shows up
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This sets after Past Sins, around after Season 1.
Really liking the story so far
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And dat Hotel Transylvania reference!
Oh boy, this is starting to get hairy! (Pun intended
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Dude you seriously need get an editor because I've spotted a lot of mistakes in your writing , but other than that, it's a really good story!
Battle brothers, Spartans, Marines, to WAR!
Ave impiriator!
Yes sir!
Hoorah!
Yeesh, what made Nezha wake up on the wrong side of the bed? He should learn to forgive and forget!
Dang you cliffhanger! Other than that, really liking the story!
++ Orbital D'awww Cannon activated ++
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(And don't worry Space Marine Brony, I have my own Orbital D'awww Cannon)
Gahh, too much shipping!
Brother-Commander, we need to retreat! There are too many ships for us to take on!
*orders fleet to retreat *
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His mane looks like american dragon Jake long
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When I first make official appearance of Shadow Dragon (PM's Darkside) on 'Road to the End' from JusSonic's MLP Universe, I'm actually base this OC on Chase Young from Xiaolin Showdown.
By 11th May 2014, I started to make my own universe after Season 4 finale - making Shadow Dragon (PM) as the good guy with heroic and hotheaded personality, and make him as bodyguard and love-interest for Twilight Sparkle, though they both argued a lot since Mystic Season 5. His mane is now spikier as Vegeta from Dragonball Z or Butch from PPG franchise. And I didn't actually think about him as Jake Long's hairstyle.
awesome chapter
One pony...
That doesn't make sense and also why kill someone when their is more then one ruler?
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He's a mercenary and stupid too. He thinks he can rule everything if he gets rid of one because Twilight Sparkle is new of being Alicorn and it's easy for him to get rid of her. And plus, some don't read newspaper or listen to radio.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
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They hate OCs because they disliked pairing him/her with any main characters and they think OCs are too perfect and better than canon, which mine is not one of them. They have flaws and moments with canon characters, they have the struggled yet painful pasts, good/bad relationship with each other and characters. After this story, just follow the sequels and find out that none of mine are perfect.
But that is your own opinion and choice of like or dislike the story.
I see that the stories were not written in chronological order as this is the newest story. Where should I start reading for this Verse series?
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I would suggest to start with Twilight Destiny, and then follow its sequels. However, that story is incomplete. But you can start with this one, and then followed its sequels that I have already set the links to follow.
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Alright, thanks!
He looks like pheinox wright
Seriously?! Why would you make Nezha a villian?! He's my favourite Chinese god!
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I would not say 'villain', but anti-hero, who is based on Nezha from Warrior Orochi Franchise.
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Yeah. Like, dude, there’s three other rulers of this land besides Twilight.
Don’t you mean Sonic Rainboom?
You misspelled the word moped into "mopped". It's supposed to be moping not "mopping".
The way you misspelled it made it look like Twilight's just cleaning her room out of sadness. If you spelled it as "Mope" or "Moping", then it'll gain the intended meaning.
I know I'm a few years late, but I'm just letting you know about this spelling problem. Also your stories (particularly this series, I haven't read your other stories yet) have a number of grammar problems and spelling mistakes. I can't count all of them because that'll involve me reading through this series, which'll take a long time.
He can also shapeshift into a handsome elf, turn into a giant flaming eye, and his Elite troops consist of ponies who became so addicted to the magical rings he gave to them, that they became immortal shadowy cloaked ghost-like figures who ride black dragon-like beasts, and can turn you into one of them if you get wounded by their weapons.
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I'm pretty sure that the "OC x Canon" thing was the one that led people to read your story.
As to why people dislike your story, I think it's like what you said:
The thing about this is that, you kind of acknowledge that your characters are too perfect and better than canon by saying that their flaws are visible in the other stories. But we're not talking about your other stories; we're talking about this story, and in this story, your OCs may come off as a bit Gary Stu-ish to the other readers.
Though I do believe that the reason why people disliked this story so much is because you mislead them. If you read the description of this story, you made it sound like a slice of life love story instead of a story about a pony who finds love in a time of war. Heck, even the cover art looks like a slice of life love story. What people wanted to see is a love story, not a war story with the romance being its secondary plot and the main plot is the war.
But all of that aside, I don't like this story nor do I dislike it. My main problems with this story was how you had Shadow and Twilight be destined to fall in love through "the zing" from Hotel Transylvania, which is completely lazy in my opinion. My other problems were the grammar mistakes and the misspellings, which sometimes confuse me in the story as they give different meanings behind their actions and dialogues. Overall, I give it a 4.5/10.
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Well, this story meant to be tryout for my own story and test audience. It was supposed to be one and only story before some fans asked me to do the sequels. So, I agreed to do more.
It's not perfect but enjoyable to write the stories.
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Yeah, I can kinda see that with the ending.
Iris Crystal is the very sweet and kindest pony Shadow Dragon has ever met. Even though Shadow Dragon is evil, Iris Crystal won't give up on him and convinced him to stop. She's just like Fluttershy :)