Octavia Melody plays her daughter her favorite lullaby. She is asked about how it came to be, and she recites a tale of love, loss, life and hope as she plays the recording of a time long gone.
Cover art by me.
Edited and proofread by NightWolf289.
Preread by jeray2000 and mild hotsauce
phonograph that had once belongs to her mother.
Belonged
Other than that slip, everything else was good.
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Thanks.
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No problem
There I was on the home page when I happened to see a familiar title at the bottom of the page.
Not bad. Not really to my preference, per se, but overall, not bad.
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To be honest, it's not really my reading preference either, but I wanted to write something different. Again, thanks a lot for the help.
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No problem. Happy to assist.
A very touching story and a very good choice in music. Kudos, my friend, kudos.
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Thank you. I was feeling pretty shitty because I wasn't getting any comments. I would rather have one view and one comment than ten thousand and zero, respectively. And then you came along! I feel better now.
4467030 You're just saying that. Besides no comments isn't that bad. Think of it as a way of saying you've nothing too terrible worth commenting on.
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Having no comments means that the entirety of the audience who read this uttered a resounding "meh". At least if they had complained, I'd know how I affected them. I'd know how to do things different. Mediocrity is the worst kind of failure.