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Hah I had insider information.
"The Immortal Game has updated"
Drop everything and get to FiMfiction!
FUS ROH DAH!
but seriously, this makes me have so many feels that I have no idea what to do with them. Words cannot describe the feelings I have, so I shall express them through the random flailings of my fingers.
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edit: just got updated and already featured? WOOOOOOOOOOO
Oh shit, this finale is shaping up to be epic as fuck.
Yaaaay!New chapter!
Oh, my, god.
-Minty
good very good
and did fluttershy just ascend or evolve or whatever you want to call it
Ahhhh!!! Omfg! Want more!!!
1077642 yeah I think so
So let me get this straight, the mane six have become absolute beasts, Luna and Celestia have a chance and Fluttershy just became dragon queen........... Crap this is going to end horribly for them
That Fluttershy scene was truly the best thing I have ever read.
>Half an hour before bed.
>"Sure, lets see if anything important updated."
>New IG chapter
>Welp, looks like I have something I need to read before bed.
Sadface at Pinkie losing the names and slowing down there. I do hope the other four transcend soon, so they can hand Titan his own flank. On a platter.
FUCK SLEEP
I was in the middle of something extremely important when this updated.
I must make a terrible editor if I can just drop something at the drop of a hat. Of course, the author came with me to read as well, so no harm done I suppose.
YESSSSSS
i have been waiting for weeks for this thing to update. i was about to go to sleep when you EVIL GENIUS YOU UpDATE GODDAMN IT.
damn it i need to see Titan's ass handed to him..... so fuck sleep
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Dear Lord.
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Don't forget Pinkie Pie.
You just had to call it The Citadel. Now every time you mention it, I think of Mass Effect's Citadel rising up from the ground. I picture Titan as a Reaper and the creatures of the land as its husks with Twilight as Commander Shepard and her Team charging The Citadel to defeat him.
I love Epic!Fluttershy. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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So, Fluttershy may just have been crowned the new princess of Everfree, and probably got Exakktus on her side in the process.
Titan, your ass is
grassash.First time to check FIMfiction in three days.
The Immortal Game has just been updated.
Load up some Shinedown, stay up until 2:30 in the morning, read everything.
...Honestly, I didn't think that this story could get any more epic. But it DID. I was putting together a review in my head as I read, but you kept one-upping everything with more and more awesomeness until I completely lost track of what I was thinking. All I could do was focus on the story.
And it was SO GOOD.
Looking at this chapter and thinking back, I can see just how much planning went into this. Like how Celestia and Luna went from fighting each other at the beginning of the story to their epic-level synergy in their final battle with Titan. So many elements of the story, when I think about them, seem like mirror-reversals of pieces of the story's earlier chapters. Am I making sense? Another one would be how Fluttershy is, obviously, unable to shout. Ever. And then... holy crap. Shouting down a dragon and finally getting her own cool outfit? That's one hell of a character arc, and it was believable.
Maybe it's the fact that I was listening to Shinedown's "Devour" and "Breaking Inside" while I read this chapter, but this is probably one of the most epic reads I've ever had the pleasure of... well, reading.
And I know it's Pinkie Pie, but did the very end of the chapter have to be so un-serious? And when are we going to get another Applejack perspective, if ever? Not really a big detail, that, but she's a personal favorite of mine and I'm more than a bit prejudiced when it comes to her. I keep asking myself what Big Mac and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are getting up to. If things end well (and I find myself expecting a stunning twist ending where the ponies lose) I hope there's an epilogue that explains details like that. Either way? This story has reached some serious literary heights.
You seem to end on the topic of titles quite frequently. Also, “So,"” Rarity puffed. “Straighten you hat.”" needs to be "straighten your hat". Another fantastic chapter, nonetheless.
Wooooooooooooo awesome
I thought this was going to be the finale, I'm both sad and happy th.at it isn't
I love you AestheticB! *screams*
'Cause fuck everything I had planned in life, TIG has updated and everything has to stop. SO EXCITED!
:reads:
why is it that every-time I think things are as bad as they can be, they get worse?
I kinda hope this is an earn your happy ending kind of scenario. Otherwise, I'll cry. And I read my little dashy with dry. eyes.
Immortal Game has updated? REROUTE ALL AVAILABLE ENERGY TO EYEBALLS AND BRAIN. I didn't need to breathe or anything, you know.
God dammit Aesthetic. This chapter was... simply amazing.
The Fluttershy scene brought me to tears. The fight between the gods? Twilight fighting like Astor?
I'm going to read this several times again now. It'll take a while for me to comprehend the finer points of this chapter.
Never stop writing.
My emotions are in tumult that the seed of a children's cartoon can grow to this. I hope good things come your way.
Halfway through Twilight's speech I got up and ran into the Everfree. Took me a moment to realize that it was just my backyard.
“Thunder and lightning! Wings and steel!”
Oh hell yes. Pegasi are best ponies.
And then Fluttershy finally taps into her magic... and grows a crown of thorns. That's somewhat concerning imagery.
I have no words for how awesome the fight at the end was, other than the unnecessary statement that Rarity is clearly best pony.
This is just ridiculously EPIC! Really can't wait to read the final two chapters.
It's 5:00 in the morning and I don't care!
I must read this masterpiece of a fic!
I wrote something about 2 days beeing too short of a break between chapters.
And I was wrong, 2 days IS FAR TOO LONG
I need the rest NOW
So good job AestheticB
YOU, SIR, just made my birthday amazing! Yes, it is my birthday today, and seeing this in the update box was one hell of a birthday present! Thank you!
Im probably gonna end up with frost-bite or something after all the chills i got from this story. It is so EPIC. Moar plz
This is nitpicking, but isn't Ponyville kind of between Everfree and Canterlot? Wouldn't have been easier to just move the storm to some further and unpopulated side of the forest?
And even if Canterlot has been evacuated (was there any reason? I don't remember any), it could have been of some use later anyway.
Woohoo! This chapter was awesome.
Epic Fluttershy was so cool.
Can't wait to see what's going on with Rainbow's team.
This chapter was amazing, but are we going to get to the fight between the mane six and Titan soon? Because I really want to see that smug bastard Titan get metaphorically or literally kicked in the balls already.
I am both overjoyed and saddened that these chapters are coming out this week. Overjoyed because they will be epic (as this chapter quite clearly shows,) and saddened because I may not be able to read the second and third until after I get back from my trip to GenCon.

*does morning internet rounds.... The Immortal Game has updated, DROP EVERYTHING!*
holy mother bucking crap.... that was amazing! Most definitely worth the wait, I've said it before, but this is one fic I absolutely love!
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Magnificent. I shall be looking forward to Wednesday.
Oh, and I'll drop a suggestion for some fitting music when the final boss arrives on the scene to do battle with our heroines:
Alternatively, it will most likely work very well with Exakktus' entrance on the battlefield as well.
1078868 I don't think TItan has any balls to kick. Alicorn babies don't work like that.
In other news, this updated. It's about damn time.
I have to comment again.
I adore this story, and I will be sad when it is over.
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The ending conversation - btw - was absolutely brilliant. It totally captures the essence of what the mane six have been, and what they are in this story....
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I wholly agree, not much else takes precedence.
aestheeetiiiiiiiiiiiiic~ why isn't the rest out right now
i need me some fanfic to read.