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Saw this and near-instantly swooned...
I take that as a sign of a good story, now to READ!
Hell yeah, Twilight Sparkle is back!
Edit: Also, did Twi just manifest a purely magic blade there at the end?
In one corner: the avatar of the king of all creation, a construct that could fight Luna and win with power to spare.
In the other corner: Twilight Sparkle in avatar state.
I'm not even gonna bother opening bets.
Finally!
In the immortal words of Duke Nukem, though I hate it's fitting....
'It's about damn time...'
Shit just got even more real
Holy crap I was expecting this tomorrow, I squeled when I saw it updated tonight. Awesome stuff as ever.
Hail to the queen, baby!
Hello! My name is Twilight Sparkle, you killed my goddess, prepare to die.
Awww yeah!
Kick his ass Twilight Sparkle!
DO IT!!!!
hell yeah
This does answer one of my questions... I think. Twilight can indeed Blade Cast, and like Alicorns, her's seems to not have a physical base.
I squeed when I saw the chapter was up early, and then I got to the end. If I was home alone I would have been shouting "AW HELL YEAH!"

Twilight's back and much more badass!
At times, I expected Twilight to tell Sparkle: "Burn and drown and crush and suffocate!"
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I think that line has been edited to say she was holding onto Titan's blade, where it had said her blade before.
I am hopeful she will use the Element of Magic to make her blade, and not merely make the blade out of raw magical energy.
After all the tension, the ending made my mind explode. Although, a part of me is kind of expecting that we'll see more evil Twilight before this is all over...
And then Twilight Sparkle started beating Titan to death with his own skull.
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"How is that even possible?!?"
Why must I find the new chapter right before I have to go to work.
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Cho'Gall hun? She did say, burn and freeze and electrocute and strangle or something similar....
Very nice chapter.
Vamponies... hehe. They sparkle!
So fucking good.
No words can describe the amount of greatness this story is.
I am one to visualize every thing i read and I will tell you, It was great watching this in my mind.
Thank you
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Yeah, I think you're right. I know it didn't read "his blade" on my first go through.
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It didn't read 'his blade' it read 'her blade' but then got fixed. Sall good!
So we still haven't seen a blade from Twilight yet, though... she may well just not need one, not sure how that works, it seems like the blade motes can be used for quite a bit more than just stabbing/shooting/exploding(Esteem).
Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck. All that wait for twilight to finally become complete and kick
Some ass and the chapter ends. Now I have to wait. You bastard. You magnificent bastard.
and now Twilight and Sparkle merge to form something more potent than Titan could imagine. ... one PO'd, Focused, well trained, in charge of herself bad ass filly named Twilight Sparkle. and then Titan gets his flank spread across most of canterlot.
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AWWWW SHIIIIT! Sparkle is gonna own some of yo ass!
My reaction: SO AWESOME!
holy shit. this just got real. and in the words of some random guy
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Shit is getting so real to the point it might cross into surreal (then possibly loop back again).
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Apparently this pleases Richard.
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Titan: "'How is this even possible?!?', you seriously expect me to say that?"
Sparkle: "Well, it does flow well with the script and forwards the plot line."
Titan: "I refuse to say it, it is far beneath one of my power and grace, why I have even laid eyes on something written by a simple pony, I know not."
Twilight: "You will say it even if I have to dismember you."
Titan: "The thought of a unicorn removing my lim..AAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUGHHHHHH HOWISTHISEVENPOSSIBLE!!!"
Twilight Sparkle: "Good boy"
(Thus ends my psychotic thought.)
AestheticB, found an error near the top: "I want it my godhood back, just for ten minutes..." There was another but I could not find it again. (Why must you write something that demands I memorize it?)
Waiting for this point to come was like watching DBZ and waiting for them to finish talking/powering up/waiting for dust to clear, to get to what I came to see: supermen killing each other for my amusement. I eagerly await badass twilight being badass.
I hate you so much. I'm already sleep deprived. Can catch almost 5 and a half hours of sleep if I fell asleep this minute, and then you have to go and post a chapter. I am gonna have to drink so much soda in the morning. We'll see how well I can teach physics in my sleep.
-Reads- -Twilight goes godmode- -HAPPY FAC -- Chapter ends-
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Esteem is OP
Looking forward to the next chapter.
*epic poker face* Hmmmm, want my honest oppinion?
Needs more Celestia. Other than that good.
*leaves to go scream into bag*
Thinking of Twilight Sparkle's potential makes me tremble.
twilight has now scared me and i man i love applejack
Stone Wall - 500 bits
Entire Store - 50000 bits
Decorative Stone Fountain - 125000 bits
Surprising the 'King of the World' - Priceless
For some things, there's Sparkle, for everything else there's Twilight Sparkle.
Oh hell yes. Twilight Sparkle is back in business, and someone's ass is going to get kicked.
I just thought I'd comment, seeing as I know what it feels like to be watched and silently judged.
I really love this fic, even when I don't comment. You deserve all the internets for telling a fulfilling and world-buillding story that, to me, somehow rings true of the canon world as well as being something else. I like your twists and turns, following where things go.
That said, I'm so very glad that Twilight is over her little identity crisis, and I would say it seems fitting that, once she regained her smarts, was able to undo Titan's spells. Rarely does a deus ex equine feel fitting, this time it does. However, whilst I appreciate the maneuvering, it's getting a bit long in the tooth for me. That's not to say change things, but one mustn't just applaud mindlessly. Esteem got away again, Rarity was still unable to beat him - it seems that without Twilight Sparkle, things have entered a hot mexican standoff where everypony loses. If that was your intention, bravo. if not, well, that's my only complaint. It seems to me you're writing a quagmire, and you've done it well, but here's hoping the story gets free of it soon.
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I can't see Rarity beating Esteem when he has trained all his life. She needs her friends working together (or just Twilight Sparkle after she rages a bit).
Ok re-read this chapter and ready for the next.
Epic Twilight Sparkle moment, is epic
And now twilight sparkle is here to kick some ASSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dearly beloved we are gathered here today to mourn the passing of God-King Titan who met his end at the hooves of a pissed off Twilight Sparkle. we will commence spitting on the coffin in one hour, for now enjoy the refreshments as titans estate is divided up among random people gathered here.
We are Delighted by this bit of ass kickery. continue.
And then Titan got his flank kicked from one side of the city to the other. Twice.
Now Twilight needs her own blade.
i have to admit when sparkle started refusing to fight the pony equivalent of hitler, all i could say was "FUCK YOU" im glad to see she changed her mind
Well, this chapter was very good and my excitement is growing as I continue to get within reach of my last readthrough's furthest advance.
The fighting is great, the conflictual dialogue is mind-blowing and I see how Titan knew all that personal information about Twi and the princess in the last chapter. That or he already did know and just asked Twilight those questions for another purpose.
Anyways, moving on!
Silver out!
Listening to Dreamtale while watching Twi coming back and punching the air in pure awesome...Life is good to me.